No good deed goes unpunished. This was certainly the case for Benjamin Kirby, who saved a young life & lost his in the process. But fear not! Thanks to a conscientious benefactor, Ben gets a second shot at life in a far more interesting world.
Now, armed with Ancient Magic of the Gods, watch as our intrepid protagonist delves into the secrets of magic, builds artifacts and cities, & travels through the Omniverse, making friends and enemies alike.
This is my first attempt at writing a fanfic (or anything for that matter). English is not my first language, but there shouldn't be too many mistakes. The story will focus on magic, exploration, kingdom-building, with romance as subplot.
Update Schedule - Wednesdays and Sundays (2 chapters/week)
Hello, author here🫡. First off, I am not a professional writer. I'm writing this because I couldn't find what i wanted to read anywhere. Some writers came close, but there was always something wanting. So I said, Fine, I'll do it myself 😆. What to expect - 1. MC will try to help others if it's not too bothersome for him. 2. No harem, but there'll probably be two love interests. 3. Magitech inventions 4. Multiversal travel 5. MC will open a school of magic and science for children across the multiverse With that said, enjoy 👍
ok this book is a fantastic harry Potter fanfiction. I finished volume one and can say it's worth the read. unfortunately the date i finished volume one coincides at the same time the author decided to take a break for studying (good luck author). anywas the book is fantastic and I'm looking forward to future volumes.
Well it happens sometimes to find a real Jewel inside a mountain of rocks, this fanfiction it's a masterpiece period. I love everything about it, you the kind of author that can make something unattractive into something fascinating. cheers 5.00 you deserve it.
One of the best Harry Potter novel out there, the best in the overpowered category in my opinion! I hope you pull through with it!
Amazing story so far! I can't wait to see him travelling to other worlds, hopefully soon! Keep up the great work!
best harry potter story that I've read in a long time...i can't wait to read more!
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A truly refreshing read! I thoroughly enjoyed it and hope the story continues to develop. I highly recommend it to everyone, even though it's still in its early stages. At the time of this review, the protagonist is on their first-year break from Hogwarts, and the multiverse aspect hasn't been introduced yet. However, I’m confident it will be amazing when it arrives. So far, the story has a great pace and features a clever and likable protagonist.
Very good story but would like faster chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
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There are several things that don’t make sense. Why give an anonymous name for his book if he's going to reveal it to a bunch of 11-year-olds three chapters later? Or his fight with the troll—if you can even call it that. He performs multiple spells that shouldn’t be possible for the average or even talented first-year, yet he says maybe in one chapter to Hermione that he wants to stay hidden (with his abilities) and not outperform his other classmates. He just wants to be the best in his class, but nothing more. I think I set the bar too high for a fanfiction. It’s good for fanfiction, but it’s nothing compared to some web novels, fanfictions, or most of the books I’ve read. However, it’s still miles ahead of 90% of the Harry Potter fanfiction I’ve read. If you’re reading this, author of the book, it shouldn’t bring you down. These are just a few remarks that may help make the book a bit better. So, here’s a positive review as well: Good grammar. I can't spot any major grammatical mistakes, and it’s enjoyable to read. The characters are relatively well-written, and I would say they are similar to their original counterparts. The story development is similar, if not the same, as the book, but since it’s a fanfiction, there’s some leeway. Overall, I would give it 4.4 stars (I’m at Chapter 16).
love the story keep up the good work see you after December
A very well written HP fic on Webnovel after a very long time. Even though the story followed the regular HP&tPS plot mostly till now, I never felt bored. The changes made are well planned, didn't feel forced. Its sad to hear that there would be no updates for this story till Jan but fine. Ace your exams and get back to give us more awesome stuff.
Great story. The character is well embedded in the world, builds bonds without any particular forcing and is also a thinking MC. I can't wait to see how the story progresses and his future travels in the multiverse!!!
There is a perfect balance between the protagonist's life and the action, it is not op at the level of destroying a nation but not so weak that even a random idiot could humiliate him.He knows how to use his powers and doesn't waste them. The author did a great job.