Two men separated by time , circumstance knowledge and abilities will come together to unite in the defense of two women who will lead them down a path they never would have gone otherwise
This would be an alright story if the author learns to write dialogue instead of telling us what is being said. It feels more like someone is telling me a story rather than me reading one. If this is fixed I’d probably give it a second chance but as it stands I just can’t immerse myself in it.
This would be an alright story if the author learns to write dialogue instead of telling us what is being said. It feels more like someone is telling me a story rather than me reading one. If this is fixed I’d probably give it a second chance but as it stands I just can’t immerse myself in it.