Mastermind of the Akatsuki
Traveling back to the Yahiko period within the Akatsuki organization, Byakuya initially sought to escape swiftly to avoid becoming a victim of the rise of Pain. However, he unintentionally acquired a system bound to the Akatsuki organization. This system offered rewards as long as the Akatsuki organization grew and developed.
To prevent the Akatsuki organization from being obliterated, Byakuya had to take charge of guiding its development, steering it onto a completely different trajectory.
When Hanzo and Danzo joined forces to crush the Akatsuki organization, they were astonished to discover its newfound strength, capable of challenging even the Hidden Rain Village.
Many years later, the five major ninja nations were taken aback to find that the Akatsuki organization had quietly subverted the entire ninja world, emerging as the uncrowned king of the shinobi realm. All of this was thanks to the man concealed deep within the Akatsuki organization.
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I don’t own anything in the novel and English isn’t my primary language. I could rely on feedback to improve myself.
Don't ask about Harem since even I don't know yet. Romance would be decided for later.
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Not a bad story, but the heavily usage of chat GPT to add more words makes the novel very hard and boring to read...you are a writer bro, just write, idk why are so many "authors" afraid of writing...
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this looks like starting of one of the best naruto. The translation is quite good, tho a sprinkle of chatgpt shows here and there. the chinese jokes have been changed to english jokes which is very well done. The MC believes in mental manipulation and if he was in harry potter verse then he would have surely given dumbdumbdore a run for his greater good. Now we see how he handles naruto world. Give it a try...
The story is good but could you provide the name of the original fanfic as I have already read this.
translation is extremely good I can't wait to read the next chapter
A amazing Naruto story. Translation is perfect . Alot of focus on political stuff, but trust me it 's intresting. MC is extremely smart and shameless. He became strong fast, but with logic. he did not randomly did Nsfw with someone and gained power . It is rare to see Good Akatsuki. I loved it!
I always hated the fics og ending, any chance you can improve it and include a romance, likely with akane? It would make it much better and improved from a usual cn
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A nice concept with potential, we see stuff from pov of some of the major antagonist of naruto and how the mc changes that. To much useless words added from gpt but overall pace is good
This is good fanfic and worth reading ...........................................................................................................................
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Second Review LOL. I have read the whole MTL Novel (Character names was 60% wrong, but I have read servel worse quality MTL than that) ____Back to the topic, The novel was amazing. He stays single whole time, no Harem, no Waifu, no romance(thankfully) Although ending was bit weird. It was amazing overall. Buykuya literally manipulated everyone. __Spoiler! __ Madara and Buykuya became buddies and bullied Obito verbally. At one point, Even Six paths joined Akatsuki. but the gains weren't that great. that's it, no more spoiling.
I'll say it briefly. This story is worth reading. There are 444 chapters in total and all of them are very exciting. Also thanks to the translator who tries for us readers
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 😍 It have a great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I think this is the first time I read story where MC join Akatsuki at Yahiko, etc time, and try to make it great organization (although that's because his system).. I like MC/Byakuya characteristic, where he doesn't afraid to killing.. I also liked that he saved Karin mother.. Maybe he can save other character which have tragic death (like Pakura, Kimimaro, Haku, etc)... Can't wait to see what will he do next to strenght Akatsuki.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍😍
Good novel just keep it up brosky……………….