Primordial Star Scripture

Quite the typical xianxia but overall acceptable to pass time. Nothing great, but nothing extremely bad. There’s bullying trope in the beginning but at least it doesn’t extent half the story and always hiding his strength, typical overbearing young master and such but it’s toned down. There’s a culture of strength no matter the background so at least Mc doesn’t create a feud every 20 chapters. The pacing overall is quite to my liking with enough detailed events, but faster progression for the genre. At least in the first 200 chapters, there’s not much side scene filling the world count like enduring 5 chapters shopping inside a city that won’t bring anything good to the story except seeing stupid people doing stupid things. I like that we start with a 10 years old in his family home scheming against him and was already in a small sect and then quickly upgraded to an acceptable position inside his starting kingdom. In a typical xianxia, we would have gotten 100-200 chapters of small clan strife and then interminable travelling to a sect, then we would have to follow through multiple sect assessments without getting any good elder support with 2-3 assassination attempts in between so it’s refreshing. One great positive that is rare for a single FL romance when the girl is also talented, there’s no young prince forced engagement or sect successor interfering and making the story progress slowly. Her master is not some unreasonable old witch. Also, I suspect she has a great background because of her bloodline even maybe in a higher realm, so I just hope she won’t get taken away against her will and we won’t see her for 1000 chapters that it typical bad xianxia. Finally, I don’t know the standard in the next realm and beyond yet, but he’s kinda too OP being able to battle a full major realm higher directly in the first realm. A more structured increase after changing environment and maybe a little bit more tactic/planning could have made the story more interesting.

Good Story in theory. Especially like his quick acceptance & embrace of the new world. None of this "How do i get back to earth" garbage. But holy hell... 1. Too much repetition of text -> Whole paragraphs either paraphrased or copy pasted. 2. Too many flowery exchanges. Like I get Respect etc. but that's just rather excessively applied in this story. 3. The MC... The Dungeon Guardian explains how it works. Then at every!!! Trial he asks himself if the voice is the Master of the Dungeon. Like that's not good storytelling, that's just stretching the word count to infinity. 4. The amount of "Could it be..." etc is baffeling as well 5. Sees the FL in person. Asks himself where he heard the name before.. Like Seriously ?? Btw Answer would be less then a month ago. Story has potential but the way of writing is just so bad.

your usual got bullied then became a genius and start slapping face novel

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