Damn, I Have to Marry the Strongest Antagonist at the Start?

Hi Author here, Sorry for being late, 5 stars because I want this review can be seen, The Images of characters will be shown below this review, and I'm working on them. U can ask me anything you want below this review! Besides, as for the SCHOOL TRANSMIGRATION, I cut it off because I suddenly realized I didn't pay much attention to the outline, SO as for this one, I do a lot effort in the outline, U can see this is another adventure of Owen, And hope U love this one TOO~

Writing quality is good but chatacters are 1-dimensional and world is unfurled as the mc progresses. Good for new readers or for time pass.... Too cliche for old daoists.......

Lots of people are being positive about this novel, but it is honestly extremely difficult to read, the mc is extremely arrogant with little to back it up, the author can't go two sentences without using a simile or metaphor. The whole thing feels almost impossible for a human to write. If you have nothing else to read then maybe give this novel a try but don't get your hopes up. I usually try and be give positive critism when I comment or review. This however I cannot think of anything you could change to fix this novel, good luck, I wish you all the best

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so its a good novel really good nice devlopment He IS a littel bit too arrogant For my taste and maybe He could schem a littel bit more and my bigest No IS the Harem Tag i am very sad about that i hope IT goes away in the Future 😁👍 sry For gramatic and yeah but all in all its a all its a good read

this novel is good the only downside is the powerscaling is very bad

It's good but it definitely could have been better. The MC seems to keep making dumb decisions whether it is stuff like forgetting to use a particular power or wasting fate points. though the main problem Is the plot inconsistencies, specifically the power scaling. At the point of the story where I am at, The MC is going toe to toe with early platinum level beast/prodigies yet just the killing intent of an inexperienced gold level character (which is a stage below platinum giving an immense gap) he( the mc) froze up, seemingly clouding his decision making 😮‍💨. Anyway there are plenty more chapters so maybe the author had fixed the problem but sadly I can't continue. Thank you and it was kinda entertaining.

An interesting concept for a novel. The writing style keeps you entertained, craving for more. I recommend you read this.

Review after 125 chapter This story overall a good read. Story had really good start.. i was expecting a good quality mc and a stable story progress .. but after few chapter it was literally ruined.. There should be a limit how much plot armour help a MC.. MC makes too many dumb decisions, not cautious, troublemaker.. because of plot armour he is surviving which is annoying to watch everytime.. similar to those chinese young master's stories.. also power scaling at this point feels like meaningless... ;')

Overall worth trying but my biggest concern is the "HAREM" tag. Nvm please make mc fall for overpowering villainess only.....no fling or such ....both are so equally matched.

ntr ? yuri? I hope not. .. ..... . ..

Authorrrr this is a Masterpiece in its genre ! I am genuinely surprised. I was expecting this to not be good and avoiding it thinking it would be stupid. Honestly if you like a MC who faces challenges and becomes stronger and stronger then its genuinely enjoyable I also like the Fl and MC love My only problem is this should be only one wife no harem romance and there are too many others after MC but as long as FL becomes more beautiful (higher cultivation/bloodline does that), and is more talented then anyone else then there is no need for harem. Also there is no way she should accept harem. I also feel the whole Raina situation shouldnt have happened but other than that all good

This has been bugging me more than it should have and I am sure I'm not the only one. Author if you don't look at comments, then I hope you take this one to heart and improve. Chapter 22 He's at 1850 Fate Points. He gains 4000 Points once he acquires the Queen Egg. 5850 Faint Points Total. Here's the weird part. He buys Order of Fire that is 600 FP Thats now 5250 FP. He then buys the Order of Fire Usage, Thunder Usage and Order Fusion Spell. He now has 1850 Faint Points left (says the chapter.) How is that possible? To give you an idea. Order of Thunder Usage is 2000 FPoints (Chapter 20 tells you so) Order Fusion Spell is 2000 FP (Chapter 19) We don't know how much Order of Fire Usage is but it's likely 2000 FP as well. Also when looking at the Status Screen it says he has the Order of Thunder Usage and Order Fusion Spell on Chapter 20. This is wrong. He only had 1900 FP during that Chapter and definitely didn't have FP over 1900 beforehand. I want to state This Isn't A Review on the novel. This is just me telling the author if you don't want people to drop your novel get the math right. Or better yet don't add in numbers if you keep getting it wrong. I do like your work don't get me wrong. It's just when you have minor errors like this, it adds up. I'll give a real review once I hit Chapter 100.

This definitely is one of the book i have come across which has potential to become one of the best out there and there are reasons for it but i am dropping it...why because of MC's personality..yeah seeing him bowing/lowering his head here and there again and again is really quite a disappointing and infuriating thing to witness at least for me..... . like there are tons of ways to greet someone but by lowering his head before others i didn't like it even one but..it is one thing if he is doing this type of greeting which can be considered one of the highest kind of honor if not the highest before his parents or teacher because they definitely deserves it..... . but lowering your head before some nobles and royals etc as a greeting i personally didn't like it..it is one thing if some ordinary people were doing it who only follows the trend and Strong etc without questioning but he not some ordinary guy/a potential future God bowing before some nobles/royals definitely didn't sit well and it is not arrogance..it is about knowing your self worth and respecting yourself first..because as i said he can definitely greet and show them respect and all and there are multiple of ways for it but greeting by lowering your head definitely doesn't sit well..... . A God bowing to his parents and True Teacher is one thing because even if he is a god one way or another he is there cause they have given/shared something with him which helped him to reach that height and even if they didn't the fact is they are his parents and Teacher that is already enough to receive highest honours..... . but for others greeting them by bowing doesn't sit well literally because unlike multiple ways of greeting..bowing is only one of the few and important gesture which is used to show submission/subservience etc and this was one of the major reason why i said it can be considered one of the highest honor if not the highest which you can give to someone which only your Parents and True Teacher deserves so just to greet someone by bowing clearly doesn't sit well..you have other multiple ways for it..... . but at the end of the day it is my perspective on the matter some will agree with me and some might not..and it would not be very surprising if some might not cause every coin has two sides so if you can bear or ignore this aspect you can give it a try cause i have read till chap 34 and i can feel it's potential that is until Author himself does somethings to make it worse.....