Harry Potter: Blood Raven
After the Triwizard Tournament, Harry, Hermione, and Sirius vanish—joining the League of Assassins. By 18, they’ve eliminated Voldemort and his Death Eaters. Returning to Starling City, they reunite with Harry’s aunt Moira and cousin Thea, just as Oliver Queen—Harry’s long-lost cousin—returns from five years on a deadly island.
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is this based off the fanfiction story where Harry goes through the same thing after the chamber and ends up with tonks luna hermione lavender and the patil twins? well more like you took inspiration from the story? try not to over do it with the descriptive information about the forest you have been reusing information with different wording i get it brings forth the imagery but it can be overdone when its done multiple times in the span of a few paragraphs. just some constructive criticism.
Instead of chat gpt use Gramarly it's way better and it doesn't ruin the text by adding what it wants and Gramarly is free. The Story it self is great 👍
HEAVY usage of Chatgpt make the writing seem soulless. The staggering amount of characters makes this already a challenging story to write much less keep it entertaining. Then we have the characters who you dont describe. I understand not describing everyone but this story feels like thier IS NO main character. Everyone blends in and this leaving the story bland. Not to mention redundant and reused paragraphs that say the same thing. Billy comes over warns about the cullens then billy comes back over warns about the cullens again. both times harry say this place is not as peaceful as we thought. Thier is no soul in this book no pasion for the subject and no love for the characters. So each character has emotion except one every chapter.