Reborn as a Mafia Prince in a Novel
Okay, so I might have made a mistake. All I did was leave a comment on my favorite novel, praising the story, and the next thing I know—I wake up as Vincent Valenciari, the heir to the biggest mafia family in the underworld.
Sounds awesome, right? Wrong. Because here’s the problem: I’m not the main character. I’m just some side character meant to die early so the actual protagonist can shine. Yeah… screw that.
This world isn’t about magic and knights—it’s about guns, bloodlines, and knowing when to pull the trigger. And lucky for me, I got the Valenciari’s Dominion, a legendary mafia bloodline that makes me a natural with firearms and strategy.
Now, I’ve got to survive Ardent Academy, a school where future kings, assassins, swordmasters, and mafia heirs fight for dominance—all while keeping my own family from throwing me into the deep end of the underworld.
Oh, and did I mention the author of this world is actually some all-powerful God watching me from the shadows?
Yeah. I’m so screwed.
I'll give it a five star before I start the real review. So, first of all, too few chapters to truly judge the book, but I'll tell you guys my view. Let's start with the plot: - Unlike the novels out there that just have the plots bent by the author's will, here it seems realistic. Characters: - Just like the plot, the character have reactions like a normal human would. So, this part is a check as well. World building: - Can't say anything about it right now since not much of the world had been disclosed. Now to the main thing - Grammar: - To be honest, it's not that good. It breaks the flow, and the words are in a mess. So, I will say, it's bad. Overall: - If the grammar was better, then the story would've been more engaging, but that doesn't mean that it is not like that right now. It is good. The grammar part is a let down, but the other points make up for it. In conclusion - You should try reading it once.
The 'author is being lazy'... It's really good, but the 'author is being lazy' and not posting chapters. A few spelling mistakes (like3or4), but not enough to bother the readers or even notice them. The plot is really fire, but only 9 chapters so far because the 'author is being lazy'... can't help it since the 'author is being lazy'. The book is worth reading... but I regret reading it because of the lack of chapters. Now I am curious, but since the 'author is being lazy,' I don't get chapters... I hate cliffhangers... But I can't help it since the "author is being lazy." | A good book, but the lack of chapters is killing it...
Well I am the Author so I'll shamelessly give a five star rating like other authors...Also if you've got any questions don't hold them back ask away I'll answer it here.
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best novel by sovereign of shadows!loved it❤
Nice read good for passing time hope the author updates more and improves the grammar it will make it more fun to read... ..........................
Nice read, it has the potential to become a good novel
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I just read the novel because I found the name interesting but the novel turned out to be amazing keep up the good work author-nim. I hope you continue to write as I really liked the novel so far.
Author, this novel has more potential than I imagined. So, I hope you will continue this novel and update this novel regularly. I request you. This novel is such a gem. So, I hope you will not drop this novel in the middle.
To think there's such a nice novel and I didn't know about it, anyway its an amazing novel with a nice easy going plot and awesome characters hope the Author will update more chaps.
What a novel this is.. it has nice plot, character development, world building, and nice story. Hope the Author updates more....................................