A young boy transmigrated into the Naruto Universe, and to his surprise, he was rather happy about it. On Earth, he was suffering from a terminal disease, so this new life was a significant improvement. However, he quickly realized that the Naruto Universe is a deadly place for someone without powers. Initially, he thought he had no special abilities like the ones he read about in many novels. But he was wrong.
He possesses both Senju and Uchiha blood, and he has a powerful brother in the Uchiha clan. Now he faces a dilemma: should he save the Uchiha clan from the impending massacre, potentially altering the entire story? Or should he let events unfold as they did in the original tale, knowing his family will also perish? What will he decide?
Hey guys, this is the author. This is the same story I previously wrote, but the original had some issues, like bad grammar and punctuation in the early chapters. I couldn’t correct them without losing valuable comments (I love interacting with you guys ^~^). Someone suggested that I publish this novel in the fanfic section too, so here it is!
This novel has a 4.13-star rating, with lower ratings mainly due to grammatical and punctuation errors, which I will try to reduce as much as I can for this version. If you have any questions, please leave them in the comment section, and I’ll reply as soon as I can.
(Please give it a try, just once is enough ^~^)
Hey guys, here are images of our main characters. I hope you like them! These are images of their childhood. I will also update their mature forms later when the story has progressed to a certain point. **** Please leave a review about your experience in the review or comment section. **** Kaida
Hey guys, here are images of our main characters. I hope you like them! These are images of their childhood. I will also update their mature forms later when the story has progressed to a certain point. **** Please leave a review about your experience in the review or comment section. **** Yomi
It was a good read until chapter 81, where everything went to hell. It’s by no means the best Naruto fanfiction I’ve read, but it was enjoyable, if we overlook the fact that it introduced Senju characters from some unknown place, knowing that the only Senju is Tsunade. Setting aside the main female character, who seemed to support something in the story, I really thought she would die and trigger the Sharingan, but that was fine. Everything changed with chapter 81; he was steadfast in his decision not to join that clan for too many plausible reasons, but one damn meal made him change. Ugh, what a huge disappointment. I can’t say if it gets better later, but we know that his ideals and convictions are made of paper.
in my personal opinion this novel would be much better in the femal lead wasnt intoduced right away and if she wasnt a o.c she serves no purpose and the communication between them is a lil cringe, but i do love the idea of the M.C and am trusting the auhor and his vision i will tag along for the ride and hope it gets better.
Very good book. it was an unexpected find, it was low in ranking but i decided to give it a try and to my surprise its a very steady book. the mc is slowly but surely developing into a powerful ninja. only thing is, its been 30 chapters and we dont have any goals other than becoming stronger to not get affected by timeline. my guy has been living for almost 2 years in ninja world and has no foolish ambitions....
Kill the girl for ms 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈 it’s me again
I already read this novel it is fantastic🤘 please support our author-san. 🙏
10/5 super nice read so far most 200 chapter's looking foreword to more..............................................................................................................................................................[img=recommend]🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪
Seriously one of the best Naruto Fan fics easy 5/5 for me. Most of them dont bother changing things in the story like the Uchiha massacre. This one does and in a way that actually makes sense which was very refreshing. There are some info dumps early on that are boring but I just skipped them personally and im glad I kept reading as the start gets much better in later chapters.
The story is good i have no problems with it. The main character is likable, Yumi while annoying at times is great too. Ryota and Kiba is just perfect. The one problem with this fic that im experiencing is that the fic has shallow dialogue. The grammar is eh, not bad but can be improved on. If you dont understand what i mean by shallow dialogue i’ll give you an example (not related to the fic just a random example) Example: “Leave me alone, Mike. We aren’t a couple anymore.” “I say when the relationship is over.” Example 2: Claire frees her wrist from Mike’s grip, rubs it and says, “Leave me alone Mike. We aren’t a couple anymore.” He steps forward, forcing her back against the wall and hisses, “I say when the relationship is over.” The second example has action that gives more depth to the situation and this can be applied in combat too.
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the mandela effect is huge, loved the novel tho
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I understand everything, the story itself is written well, but damn, the pacing of the story is just fucked me up.. 200 chapters, in 200 chapters the hero grew from 5 to 9 years old.. I like that there is no system here and that the hero gains strength through training and efforts, but damn here is too much training chapters, this arc is tooooooooo long... by reducing the number of chapters with trainings, you could save 100 chapters
Hasta el momento es una excelente historia con una velocidad de desarrollo agradable ni muy rápido ni muy lento, con varios detalles que no se mencionan en el manga y que se agradece bastante, el MC es simpático y un maníaco del entrenamiento jajaja y se siente bien su desarrollo como shinobi