Naruto: The new beginning
Minato and Kushina: “Happy Birthday! Make a wish!”
Naruto: “I wish for my mother to give me a sister.”
Kushina: “Huh???”
Minato: “Why not wish for a younger brother?”
Naruto: “Because as the elder brother, I want to be as gentle and powerful as Big Brother Itachi. But if it were a younger brother, he’d probably be as stupid as Sasuke.”
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What kind of changes will Alex, the traveller who became Naruto, bring to the Naruto world?
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* Slow burn & Wish fulfilment
Disclaimer: English is not my native language, I am trying to improve as I write.
* Also, the cover image is mine, If you want Illustrations like this check out my P@treon/Iamxeno
* I don't own Naruto or any character other than the oc. This is purely a fanfiction
B/S: I am not the author of this fanfic; it is an Mtl, but I am making it readable, by adding my own content
Mlt link : https://www.mtlnovel.com/konoha-son-of-the-fourth-hokage/
more forced Hinata and Naruto relationship. Don't waste your time. When will these dumb fanfic writers learn to stop forcing relartionships, Hinata and Naruto only ended up together cause the "fans" wanted it, despite the relationship itself lacking and making no real sense that kishi even had to retcon flashblacks and do a movie to convince people to believe it 🤦♂️
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i just want to talk about grammar that really bad
Hey, everyone if you like the fanfic, please leave a review & I hope you enjoy this journey with me.
This is a very nice fanfic. I hope there will be more chapters during the day. I can't wait. You are really successful with this fanfic.(Perfecto)
very nice very nice very nice very nice very nice
The first chapter needs editing imo. It's confusing and I needed to reread it to figure out what was going on. After the first chapter, it's no longer an issue. Grammar needs work though. I just don't like how no one seemed to question how naruto used adamantium chains to help or how a baby is using chakra to begin with. The dialogue also seems awkward at certain parts as well. Otherwise, the fic has started off well. This is a review after reading 5 chapters, but the story isn't for me. Good luck with the fic!
Buena novela pero hay episodios a la mitad
i just want to talk about 1 think can you make story have harem
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