to be above average

hi it's the author here. This is my first novel, be warned that it's probably not going to very good. Mostly because I'm just starting out and I'm just trying to pop my novel cherry. I really want people who read this not to enjoy it..... but to examine it and give me a critical analysis of what you truly think about it. Don't be shy to call out every flaw and problem you find. I promise that my next book is definitely going to be wayyy better !!!!. xoxoxo i love queens