Frosthold’s history is marked by its storied battles with the Obsidian Empire, always emerging victorious against overwhelming odds. However, as the 17th birthday of Prince Jovian arrives, it heralds the start of a devastating conflict that puts Frosthold’s legendary defenses to the ultimate test. As the empire’s forces breach the kingdom’s defenses, Jovian and his sister Selene are forced to flee their crumbling home. Navigating through a hostile world, they must not only survive but also forge a path to reclaim their kingdom and restore its lost glory.
This was a really good read. The use of vocabulary and terminology is masterful, and each sequence and scene within the novel is well done. Even with so little chapters, the author has managed to hook me to the world and main character. This novel has induced an enjoyment for reading that I haven’t felt in quite literally years. I hope you keep writing CREATORX for this book and you as an author have serious potential amongst a heap of garbage, reused, cliche novels.
Looks promising so far. Intriguing plot and nice set up. Sticking around how it goes, hopefully it gets better and better. And author I hope your release schedule is consistent.
Seems promising. The epigraph at the beginning of each chapter makes it look more intriguing and it's the first on this platform I have read that makes use of such. Well done author, but don't disappoint. Continue to releasing more chapters.
I'm not into war kind of stories, but this intrigued me The stakes are high, and their struggle. Overall I like the writing style of the Author and hope not to drop this. keep it up☺️
New peak rising. Update look decent. Like what I'm seeing from the world background too. Jovian 100%
Rating my own story lol. But i think it's pretty good. Great world build and lore Nice prose Nice fight scenes Adventure Political intrigue I personally think this is web novel's own a song of fire and ice, realm of the elderlings, the first law, name of the wind. Don't believe it? Come and see, Come and see!!!
I really liked it. It reminded me of games of thrones a little and your descriptions of area and buildings was really well done. I have no complaints but would love to see how the story develops after more chapter. Ill leave another review at that time
A good start and I am looking forward to this novel after a 100 chapters, I like the epigraphs at the beginning of the chapters, one of the things that catches my fancy are things like this.
Great story so far. I am used to dialogue-heavy writing but after reading this I am developing an interest in descriptive writing. The story is well-crafted and very well-narrated. I especially enjoyed the chase sequence and Jovian’s inner monologue during and after the death of a major character. I won't spoil it but if you are into war fantasy then give this one a chance, it's worth it. Great job again author 👍