Naruto: The Medical Shinobi

Slow but still enjoyable. The powers are unique and character is well defined. Loved the Fujin reference from The wind calamity. The author is clearly new to writing and has long way to go. But still very good start.

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It was really slow and boring to start with, but if you are patient enough to read up to at least the last 50 or so chapters, you would appreciate the character developmenr, improvement in author’s writing and world development.

with this story pace you will burn out pretty fast! too much water. you know Naruto, he knows naruto, we knows naruto so you can just skip most unnecessary explanations. at this pace if you ever try to finish this work it will take trice more chapters than original work. too dramatic without any movement.

Author I get the starting is a bit slow and everything. But you have to understand, in this platform the first few chapters are the deciding factor to continue or not. He is an adult before dying, so his mentality at the beginning of his transmigration seems a little childish. Maybe previous memories might affect them but still he has many mind related perks, so it should be controllable. He is a scientist so making his character more logical and calculating type won't change the course. Overall a good story, intriguing but need to read further to get interesting. Hope you all the best Author.

This novel is great! Although the ‘intro’ before the reincarnation takes place is a bit long, it is detailed and sets the stage for the story really well. The MC is likable and the direction the story is going with is intriguing. As of now, the story hasn’t progressed far but still, I’m hooked. Keep up the good work!

It is well-written and the unique and well-researched abilities make it refreshing from the repetitive uchiha/senju OC you normally see. It makes me feel like there is a strong foundation for development with limitless potential, especially if you get creative. interested to see where it goes. I would say however that the beginning before the reincarnation is unnecessarily long and would most likely put some people off so it may be worth editing it and trimming it down in my opinion. A more relevant image and detailed synopsis would also go a long way 🫡 keep up the good work Mr Author

It is obvious a lot of the writing or at least editing is done with AI. I just don't like how the AI talks in stories like this.

great potential; the story has to be one of the best on this site. The author is a beginner but writes very well. Of course, if you search, you will find some errors or inconsistencies, but the story and the characters have great potential. I particularly like the Fuiinjustsu part. For me, the author could perhaps improve the characters reactions part because people's reactions are as if he were a genius and only think, Ok. Sincere author, don't give up on this; lots of potential.

Keep going bro its one of the best Naruto fanfic ever............................................................................................................ . . ....

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I wrote a really long review then realized it didn’t matter. I’m on chapter 25 and I think I’ve only had like 4 chapters of content. The rest is all adults glazing MC. He opens his mouth and everyone has to gasp in shock. Over and over and over and over again. I’d have loved a medical themed Naruto FF but so far this has been brain dead world MC so smart FF that happens to be in Naruto. Author says it gets better. I’m just going to skip to chapter 50 when they said they stopped using AI for this mess. And this is only because he did a shout out to Devilhex. If the 2nd 25 chapters are anything like the first I won’t miss anything.

The powerset is top. Great even… But the story feels like one sob story after another like a victim competition, described with very lengthy flowery language in excruciating detail… to the point that after a while I caught myself frequently just reading the beginning of a paragraph before skipping it, if I couldn’t find any substance… I just couldn’t care anymore really. Also some things and judgements just kinda rubbed me the wrong way … everyone has their own opinions and it usually doesn’t bother me but it just culminated with the rest and made this overall unenjoyable for me to read… In conclusion