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"We're talking about world destruction if I use my full power" Parker sighed
"Well, as for me, I've never gone full power in my entire life" Lukas said
"And Lukas is stronger?"
Over powered MC- Sure thing here
Strong acting weak- Sure thing
This isn't harem please, it's more of action and magic and less romance.
Lukas, the slime Lord got reincarnated into the future where ancient magic has nearly gone extinct. He also discovers that his slime clan had been eradicated by ice dragons! Lukas, alongside a fiery commoner and a former cult member, they uncover secret plots to resurrect the ice dragon Lord. As Lukas and his companions face off against dragons and mysterious forces, they soon realize that far greater threats are looming, with the fate of the world hanging in the balance.
How should I put it? The story's progress in general doesn't seem to be fast, but when reading it, it feels like it's going by. I kind of feel like there's a lack of depth in the supporting characters. The dialogues are too much. one-sidedly, you seem to ignore the supporting characters too much. It feels like the supporting characters are just NPCs, complete their tasks and then disappear.
Not too bad of a story, sounds really nice. For now 4 starts is the most i can give. Also thanks on reviewing on my novel.
This novel has several things that really hooked me. The plot with Lukas balancing two such different lives, as both a Slime Lord and a noble, adds a lot of depth to the protagonist. That duality creates a super interesting internal conflict. Plus, the world you’ve built is fantastic, with all the noble politics, the magic, and those ice dragons that are a constant threat. ✨ The humor sprinkled throughout is key to giving the reader a break amidst all the conflict. As for the secondary characters, I think Henry, Simon, or Ellice could benefit from a bit more development. Lukas is really well-defined, but these characters could gain more weight if you explore their motivations or backstories a bit more. That would give them more depth and enrich their relationships with the protagonist. Oh, and one last thing: Lukas is incredibly powerful, so it would be interesting to see if he faces a real challenge further down the line.
The more i read this book .. the more I'm liking it .. man i need more chaps!!!
from the first chapter alone i already loved the world building and the idea of the novel. i've never heard of a slime lord story before, so this is quite fresh amidst all those dark novels that focus too much on edgy things. + i already love lukas. but im writing this down after reading three or four chapters, so i'll look forward to more. keep going!
A very beautiful novel and a better writing style that makes you excited for the upcoming events I hope it continues and doesn't stop................
Good writing, has potential. OP protagonist is not my style but there may be exceptions