a man who forgot what was trust was fighting in a battlefield suddenly something happened Infront of his eyes and he got another chance to achieve his goal. Will he be able to rise? Will he be able to achieve what he wants? Will he achieve peace? Well the answer lies in one thing.... Cultivation!
many mistakes and not explained in detail but ig i will look forward to the future story if u could can u provide the cultivation stage and imp information fast cuz it will be hard to understand otherwise
finally ig i can see something i actually like with mc who is very evil btw i wont rlly love it if there is a harem but ill root for u mr author
well done :)
nice starting has some potential. i like the mc's mindset and his evilness
a good starting ig. well i like these kind of stories ig
ima review my own novel. ye I'm shamelessly 🐼