Tenji
Mataski Tenji grew up with dreams of heroism, imagining himself as the savior of his kingdom. But as he enters adulthood, those dreams are shattered by harsh realities. Exiled from his homeland after being rightly accused of treason, Mataski loses everything—his honor, his love, and the life he once knew. Alone and nearly broken, he vows revenge on the king who betrayed him.
However, Mataski’s journey takes unexpected turns as he meets a compassionate doctor and her young daughter, who begin to heal not only his physical wounds but also the scars on his soul. As he struggles between the desire for vengeance and the hope for a new life, Mataski discovers that the path to peace may require him to confront not only his enemies but also his own inner demons.
In a world where loyalty is tested and power corrupts, *Tenji* is a tale of redemption, sacrifice, and the search for true purpose.
I can see that book has potential. I like the way that you told the story from his past with his family then to the present day where he is being exiled. It's better than most the things I read, but I do wish you add more dialogue tags in the next chapter to make the story feel more real.