AFTER A TRAGIC LIFE, A MAN IS REINCARNATED IN THE BODY OF A BOY WITH POWERS TRAPPED IN A LABORATORY. AFTER MEETING PEOPLE ALONG THE WAY, HE REALIZES THAT HIS LIFE HAS CHANGED AND NOW HE WILL HAVE TO DEAL WITH CONSTANT PERSONAL AND SOCIAL CONFLICTS.
I have one question can u plz give
Superboy Tactile telekinesis that allowed him to simulate Superman, flying, and laser vision, and its more he can do.🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾
2 months ago
8
eurocolombia_pili
I'm looking forward to the story, the truth is that You have some grammar mistakes, but it's something that You should at least try to Fix,I'll keep watching You...
2 months ago
5
tactless91
While the updates are a little slow for my taste (please author provide a time frame for updates so I don’t go mad waiting on this awesome story) this story so far is by far an interesting take on young justice and somewhat of a semi au based on how superboy escaped Cadmus. It’s very well written and seems more towards what real life might take on it as no scientists died in young justice but this story has a more realistic taste. Good work my friendly author ✍️.
2 months ago
4
Pedro_Casta
The story is a little slow, for now I like it, but I Will wait a little bit for You to upload more chapters, I hope You don't stop and continue it.
2 months ago
4
The_man_The_myth
2 of the reviews beneath are Authors Alt acounts that he made on the same day. The story is a 1 for 1 to young justice and the author doesn’t change anything at all even after 20 chapters and looks like nothing will come close to changing for another 10. I’m inclined to believe the author put in a prompt into AI for superboy and just rewrote it off of that since it’s almost identical to the actual story but slightly changed. Honestly I just hate authors who alt review themselves
a month ago
3
toshisero
its very hard to read, author really complicated simple things when he wants to add his thing to original but it made it worse. mc is unlikable and dissappointment. grammer is bad. you have to force yourself to read cause of grammer and unnecessary long and bad inner dialouge of mc and others
a month ago
3
LPMJHB
Well the truth is that you need to change a lot of things, both in grammar and story, it's not bad but make more noticeable changes, this gets boring, I hope that by chapter 25 at the latest there will be changes, I'll be waiting until then, I trust it will improve.
I have one question can u plz give Superboy Tactile telekinesis that allowed him to simulate Superman, flying, and laser vision, and its more he can do.🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾
I'm looking forward to the story, the truth is that You have some grammar mistakes, but it's something that You should at least try to Fix,I'll keep watching You...
While the updates are a little slow for my taste (please author provide a time frame for updates so I don’t go mad waiting on this awesome story) this story so far is by far an interesting take on young justice and somewhat of a semi au based on how superboy escaped Cadmus. It’s very well written and seems more towards what real life might take on it as no scientists died in young justice but this story has a more realistic taste. Good work my friendly author ✍️.
The story is a little slow, for now I like it, but I Will wait a little bit for You to upload more chapters, I hope You don't stop and continue it.
2 of the reviews beneath are Authors Alt acounts that he made on the same day. The story is a 1 for 1 to young justice and the author doesn’t change anything at all even after 20 chapters and looks like nothing will come close to changing for another 10. I’m inclined to believe the author put in a prompt into AI for superboy and just rewrote it off of that since it’s almost identical to the actual story but slightly changed. Honestly I just hate authors who alt review themselves
its very hard to read, author really complicated simple things when he wants to add his thing to original but it made it worse. mc is unlikable and dissappointment. grammer is bad. you have to force yourself to read cause of grammer and unnecessary long and bad inner dialouge of mc and others
Well the truth is that you need to change a lot of things, both in grammar and story, it's not bad but make more noticeable changes, this gets boring, I hope that by chapter 25 at the latest there will be changes, I'll be waiting until then, I trust it will improve.