Actor in Hollywood

Dumbest chinese hollywood fic I've ever read MC family is wealthy and connected with big producers He goes to audition and a big producer saw him and is awestruck by his sharp eyebrows instead of small part in friends he gives him big role MC is roommate with "Chris Evans, James Franco, Seth Rogen" He meets underage Scarlett Johansson just outside seth and James theatre An agent just saw him and i literally means just saw him and he was too awestruck with his sharp eyebrows and gave him his business card MC is perfect and everyone is Awestruck with his sharp eyebrows

there are so many fillers for example mc goes for a photo shoot and it takes 13 chapters to finish it or repeated shit about titanic, and many other which takes more than half of the chapter and the plot moves slower than a snail

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Good start keep it up👍 update regularly. and don't drop this novel👍

this could very well be a pleasant read, but the amount of filler is daunting. It’s too much effort to trudge through entirely useless paragraphs and chapters that are just there for the sake of being there

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this is just gob s.h.i.t it's just a waste of time

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it's decent for a timepass novel, but God it's slow and it's utterly exhausting to read because it's so slow. it's so slow it's downright pathetic.

A bit too verbose for my liking but nothing to pick on besides that. Happy to see he hasn’t been in bed with 10 actresses by now. Hopefully it stays the same

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I liked it. But more new chapters are needed. There is a lot of water. It was necessary during the shooting of the film. Where is the romance? Where is the girl of the main character?

Firstly I love these types of fics, so my higher score should probably be lower… this is slightly different in that it’s a real slow burn. I mean slooooowwww. That said the mc and other characters are all fleshed out and seem real rather than one episode filler characters. World building and movie choices are all new and novel so far, especially for the time line. If you are okay with a slower pace and some redundant chapters it’s a good read