This story follows three boys, each sharing their own love story. Each of them experiences a different journey in finding and building a relationship with the one they love.
The writing is great and the pacing is fast too but maybe a little... little thing that could make the mc seem different than the other typical mc would make the story much nicer. I give the world background a 3 since it's not really telling me much about it (other than to say that they're in school or something) but all in all, I still liked it otherwise since it's probably just the beginning or so. keep up the good work 👍 (I'm not a professional writer or anything. I'm only saying stuff that passes my mind)
6 months ago
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Apple_Citrus
I'm sorry for self-voting my own novel. please let me know your thoughts about this novel, i need criticism and suggestions 😭🙏
The writing is great and the pacing is fast too but maybe a little... little thing that could make the mc seem different than the other typical mc would make the story much nicer. I give the world background a 3 since it's not really telling me much about it (other than to say that they're in school or something) but all in all, I still liked it otherwise since it's probably just the beginning or so. keep up the good work 👍 (I'm not a professional writer or anything. I'm only saying stuff that passes my mind)
I'm sorry for self-voting my own novel. please let me know your thoughts about this novel, i need criticism and suggestions 😭🙏