Minato in Marvel

Dissapointing. Author forces plot and doesn’t seem to have a good understanding of the Naruto world and especially the MC Minato. It’s like someone read the summary of seasons and then decided to write a novel. Essentially author is just bad at writing if he says he has seen Naruto, if he hasn’t then he shouldn’t be writing this trash. I am so disappointed. The idea is good though and I hope someone else with better skills and understanding of both Marvel and Naruto makes a novel on this idea.

Reviewed at 10 chapters. Writing Quality: 5 Stars. No grammatical errors that I noticed, sentences are very palatable for a reader, all-in-all stellar job. Stability of Updates: 5 Stars. At the time of reviewing the author uploaded multiple chapters in a day, I imagine they stockpiled, if not then that amount of quality that fast is worthy of even 6 Stars if I could give such a rating. Story Development: 4 Stars. It's very hard to grade this category when a story is in it's early chapters because any criticisms are kind of baseless when there isn't much material, so take this with a grain of salt. The speed of the pacing is good, but it's a bit too linear for my taste with how it jumps from each individual problem to the next, and on a grand scale the story just seems aimless. Minato will return to Konoha after he regains his memories so it calls into question what he would even do on Earth. Character Design: 4 Stars. Adapts everyone pretty well, but I wish for the X-Men not to feel like such pushovers. World Background: 3 Stars. Character perspectives are too boxed in and the linear pacing hinders the world's ability to stand on it's own and feel truly lived in and real. It feels far too much like a one-man show with how we barely get new perspectives and how the story throws problems at Minato one at a time. Could do with more interactions with extras, perspective shifts to relevant characters about stuff not only involving the M.C, perspective shifts to characters not actually relevant to the plot currently (i.e Avengers, S.H.I.E.L.D, yada yada), intertwining plotlines instead of the linear pacing we have. Just my own personal opinion though.

I just found this today and it's really good. Minato in Marvel, I have read another one with the same premise but it was poorly executed. This one is different, I like how It is the actual Minato(?) that got transmitted and not a reincarnation or something. Hope you can do the character justice. The story's development, since its only the beginning I can't say much about it. In terms of potential, the story has got loads of it. That's all. All the best author, l hope to read more of this.

The books is very good!, just one question author, does he ge to use kurama's chakra?.

The author knows what he is doing, Minato's power is shown perfectly.✨✨✨✨🤑🤑✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ditxixoyxkhchckg hclh kg lh lh lh ohcogxitxigc be lb kg jfxruzhrz

OK STRAIGHT UP THIS NOVEL STARTS OFF SWINGING!!!!! it grabs you by the balls, the magneto arc was crazy but here are my notes minato is more then just his teleportation and rasengan, he was a genius among genius so a pizza delivery boy job ehhh he could do better. anyways the whole idea is amazing and im surprised no one has thought of this before i highly recommend everyone give this a novel a read.

Great quality writing.

Great fic, good grammar, hardly any misspellings. There are also no glaring mistakes in sentence structures. The pace of everything flows nicely it doesn't feel rushed or a slog to get through either. I love that Minato is the MC and not some random reincarnated hobo. The premise is what caught my attention but the action scenes are too good, like I feel this is what Minato would do and I'm not confused when the action is going on. Great fic Boss Man, I look forward to more shenanigans P.S. I'm gonna need some spider-man and Minato interactions.

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I really enjoyed this story, there’s no real complaints I have about it, it’s just genuinely good. Minato is awesome as always, the Marvel characters are well written and I’m seriously anticipating more. Hopefully shield comes knocking though, since I’d find it strange for them not to.

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10 chapters so far, the MC arrived in another reality and everything happens in the most fluid way I can imagine, at first it seems like he's a double character but apparently he was quickly discarded for the good of the story, the story has as its protagonist the MC with memory loss who quickly recovers fragments chapter after chapter, and the first interactions, although forced perhaps, are nothing more than the plot that gave rise to all this, I don't know what else to say, the story is worth it.

this is an amazing story. You are doing an amazing job of capturing the characteristics and thought process of the characters amazingly.