Spider-Man Mayhem

Whether spiderman kill or not is not a problem but sparing his enemy like green goblin, Doctor Octopus, Kingpin is frustrating, that's why dark fanfiction. Also is it harem please

The author killed Peter Parker’s parents because he couldn’t step away one step from the canon and create something of his own, something that has logic, and not “I’m Peter Parker and I was reborn as a genius, I know the Marvel plot, but I don’t know.” that Peter Parker's parents will die! the author has no creativity, only following the canon with minor changes in the form of a harem, I guess the whole meaning of rebirth is lost, and therefore the meaning of ff by marvel!

Just another AINcreating Spider-Man carbon copy fic if you looming for a refreshing take or a decent fic then skip this it's not worth the time wasted to read another poorly thought out copy paste fic

i never felt so annoyed on how this was i knos its a friendly super hero fic but taking all the annoyance of peter old life like the bullying and non violence is just annoying since its not peter from the comics about the same only diffrence is he has an harem and a stronger and not even op level or none of that just not my cup.of tea but if any of my disagrements yall like this will probably be for you

NO HERAM BONK No HERAM no HERAM it’s lame and gay and also for loners BOOOO

The writing is good but I don't like the story. It feels too wish fulfillmenty, idk if that's a word but you know what I mean. Characters felt bland, updates are great. World BG is fine.

Good luck author and just like E.I.N give your all in this and for this new novel you can have this

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Here we go the pitfall most Spider-man story's fall into to many spider-people first Felicia then it spirals out of control from there that and too many jarring switches in prospective

It's a wish fulfillment type novel. So for any serious readers, it will break the immersion again and again due to the absurd number of times simple common sense is ignored in the story. You can try it if you don't believe me. 😔

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Good Lord, the dialogue! I appreciate that this is an amateur writer, but please stop watching anime. That's not how people talk. No one has called someone else a rogue on this side of the millennium. No waiter has ever said "It shall be done" to a pair of high school kids.

Author I really really love your work. But I like to ask one thing will white tiger will also appear ( from ultimate spiderman series) and rest of his teammates. And please remove M.J please

What's wrong with Spider-Man fanfic authors having a harem? It's so out of character for me that I can't read most of these fanfics.