Diamond No Ace: The Monster

There's a lot of Diamond no Ace fics popping up lately and the best part is all of them have their own unique charm to them. This is also one of them Furuya has always been a character which is one step away from being too op of a character this fic has captured the essence of that very nicely. progression of story is good. overall highly recommended to those seeing this review.

t's good, but the MC's personality is becoming more and more like Furuya, so there's nothing special. [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]

This 'Diamond no Ace' fanfiction is an absolute gem! The writer captures the intensity of the sport with vivid detail, and the character development is spot on. A must-read that begs to be continued!

I've read a lot of fanfics out there and this is the first time I've come across that Furuya became the protagonist, I have a lot of expectations for this hope you could continue to upload more chalpter! Expect power stones from now on :))

I love it. The story is actually good and I should say that there is no boring chapter for me.This story may not be to everyone's liking, especially if you are not a fan of Furuya in the anime but you should give it a try, I am not a fan of Furuya, I don't hate him either. But, I find this story exciting, there are some fun chapters too, and the most important thing is Update Stability gosh with all the fanfic I came across with doesn't even have updates for YEARS. So this one is the best.

Another diamond no ace or ace of diamond fanfic. I’d say that first of all my review is bias. I’ve read two of the authors previous fanfics based on the same story. 1. The writing quality is quite good, you rarely see mistakes from the author. And if you do it’s never a mistake that will bring you out if the story. 2. Updating stability, the author has been very stable in his release for this ff. To be fair it’s hard to rate this as updating stability can change over time. 3. Story development, the author has definitely added his own charm to the story as well as is focused on the Mc. While many fanfic regarding Diamond no ace end up being a servant to sawamura or furuya. Or they completely disregard the two. Currently the author is focused on his mc. And this is something I like. It would be nice for the MC to suddenly be surprised by sawamura in the future. 4 character design, while he didn’t design most of the characters he has made full use of the known cast. I think over all in this subject he’s done a great job. As well as the Mc being quite interesting. 5. Works background, he’s done a good job so far. One note is when the scene changes he rarely ever describes the scene. While not necessary it can add a bit to each scene or our mental image. (Notice the last is mostly for non baseball scenes, while baseball scenes are typically described adequately) you could of course add information on shifting formations moving forwards back left or right but I feel most readers especially if they don’t know baseball may get confused if you do add it. I guess this suggestion is mostly for if you play a team that focuses on tactics, small ball ect.

Okay, so this is my first time writing a review on Webnovel. I usually just read and move on, but I noticed this fanfic doesn’t have that many reviews, which is honestly a crime because it’s really good! I’ve been following this story since before it even reached 100 chapters, and I just gotta say, this one’s a hidden gem. Here’s why I personally enjoy it: 1. The writing’s actually solid. 🤌 It’s easy to read, not messy or confusing, and flows well. It’s not super polished, but it doesn’t need to be, it does the job and keeps me hooked. 2. The characters feel realistic, especially with how they react to Furuya being super OP.🫶(SPOILER, YOU CAN SKIP) What I liked is how it didn’t just show them instantly accepting that a first-year was suddenly stronger than everyone else and even becoming the ace. At first, you can really feel the resistance, they were against it, frustrated, and couldn’t accept it right away. Which is real. I mean, who wouldn’t feel that way if someone younger just came in and outshined everyone? But the way they eventually started to accept him and adjust their mindset was also done really well. It made the growth of the team dynamic more natural. 3. Daily updates!!🫡 This part makes me so happy. I don’t have to wait weeks to find out what happens next. The author’s consistent too, like they really care about finishing the story properly. Respect. 4. Love the way other characters (especially Sawamura) are handled.👏 Most fics just make Sawamura super insecure once the MC shows up, but not here. They still see each other as rivals, and it makes the dynamic way more interesting. Plus, the other players actually have depth. They’re not just background noise. 5. The matches are fire.🔥 They’re exciting, well-written, and sometimes I even end up rooting for the other team, just like in the anime. It has that same kind of hype. ⸻ That said, I do have a few things I’d suggest: • The pacing gets a little repetitive sometimes. It feels like it’s always a match, then some quick meeting or chat, then another match again. I’d love to see more character interactions outside the games—like how they’re thinking, bonding, or maybe even clashing when they’re not on the field. It’d add more flavor. • Furuya being OP is cool and all, but I wish we got more explanation in the earlier chapters. Like yeah, he trained in his old school, but the jump in skill is kinda crazy. That’s why I appreciated the recent chapters (past 250)—he’s actually showing a bit of struggle now, which makes it more interesting, especially since he’s just 16. • One last thing that’s been bugging me (in a good way, I guess): I keep questioning if the MC is a transmigrator? He was super set on getting into Seidou and acted weirdly familiar when he first met Sawamura. I thought he knew the original story, but then there are times when he seems genuinely confused. So I’m still unsure if he is or not. Would love if the author clarified that more down the line. Anyway, this fanfic really deserves more love. The author’s clearly putting in the work, and it shows. If you’re thinking about reading it, do it, you won’t regret it.👌

Its pretty average, the characters feel way more small minded and everyone seems to have reduced intelligence.Also there is a lot of dumb face slapping going on. Literally everyone is like oh he missed the ball twice hes just a first year nothing special(even his own teamates!!!!!!) then bam homerun. Even more annoying is the random motivational speeches the MC gives every time they ask for his opinion, which is him saying cringeworthy stufff every time. So basically the story seems kind of depressing and you cant picture the characters actually saying the stuff they are saying

i haven't read it yet but i just wanted to be the 10th reviewer of this fanfic. I'll just edit it if I think its bad.....................................

Really enjoying this. Sure some maths errors here and there like getting innings number wrong etc but otherwise a fantastic FF. I really like that in this fic Seidou batters are actually decent and do score runs. Even with a new picther they might take innings or two to get used to it and bat in some runs which is good as in many FF's Seidou batters basically barely ever score at all which makes no sense as Seidou was keeping up with other schools even with them lacking proper dependable pitchers. They kept up with them with solid defense and high quality batting. Furuya makes for a entertaining SI since I do like his power style as all Eijun FF turn fic into overall technical mess and just keep levelling up their foes without any reason to nearly hug the canon.

Its a good fanfic but could be better.......................................... ..... .. .......... .............................................................................................