One Piece: I will become stronger by checking in

I mean does any story that one piece that has Mc join luffy crew and becom3 subordinate deserve a high rating. No. Trash. Had potential but author had make simp Mc for luffy

Got to know only now in chapter 104 that this book is going to have harem…there was no tag or warning. My time was wasted. I hate you author/translator. Absolutely despicable behaviour.

I don't understand why the reviews are so low. This fanfic is quite good, it's fast paced and probably but still is fun. It will probably be a short fanfic but that doesn't make it 'bad'. So, recommendable. But only for the ones that found quick paced and easy -going fanfics fun.

The story could be so much better if the translator didn’t make so many mistakes with names as well as writing ONE PEACE instead of Pirate King.

I didn’t enjoy it. He just joined luffy soon as story started. I don’t know if the storyline will change later on, but still boring that he joined mc of the story.

Overall story quite good MC quite strong with current timeline But need editing for name (focus) Quite important for story in one piece Jdsksjsksjdjxjdjdjdkxjxjxhdjdkdkdkdjxdkkdkdkxkxkxxkxkxjxjxjxjxjxjxjkxkskskzkxzkkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkz

The power ups are way too much, mf got all three haki while they haven't even reached Logue town. Also his attitude bro why are you even on the crew if you're gonna act like you're above the captain??? Also, harem? No warnings about that? Really had to drop after reading the part where he hugs nami during arlong Arc and whispers some embarassing stuff, actually made me physically cringe holy!

Raw ? .

it's pretty good finally something worth Reading

I don't know why people are calling this bad I thoroughly enjoyed it and credit should be given when it's due. Yes I know they should be critical but at least have a good reason and not just say, "He joined Luffy in chapter 1 and so it's bad," Like???? Anyway I hope you write more and more I love this story

Please tag ‘harem’ if you are going to write about it. not everyone likes reading Harems and getting invested in the story and later facing trash plot like harem ugh...

Nice story so far Editor need editing for early chapter to more better translation Need more story dhdudkdhdhshzgshhasgshsbzgshsjsgsjbsbssbbsshhshzhzuzuzhzhzhzhzhzhzhzjzjzjzjzjznzhzhjzjanzbzhzjzjznznznznznznnznz

Мне очень зашло))) Сюжет хороший, идёт плавно. Нехватка в редакторах. Но читабельно. Продолжайте в том же духе [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Nice so far Need more chapter👍 Ugygyvxeubbuxdbusxsxibixbibxiwbbxinxwnuxnzinwxixbuwxbwuxbuxbxibxubxubxuxbuxbxubxuxnuxbuxnxubxixbuxnxubxixnuxbxu