One Piece: I will become stronger by checking in

I mean does any story that one piece that has Mc join luffy crew and becom3 subordinate deserve a high rating. No. Trash. Had potential but author had make simp Mc for luffy

Got to know only now in chapter 104 that this book is going to have harem…there was no tag or warning. My time was wasted. I hate you author/translator. Absolutely despicable behaviour.

I don't understand why the reviews are so low. This fanfic is quite good, it's fast paced and probably but still is fun. It will probably be a short fanfic but that doesn't make it 'bad'. So, recommendable. But only for the ones that found quick paced and easy -going fanfics fun.

The story could be so much better if the translator didn’t make so many mistakes with names as well as writing ONE PEACE instead of Pirate King.

I didn’t enjoy it. He just joined luffy soon as story started. I don’t know if the storyline will change later on, but still boring that he joined mc of the story.

Please tag ‘harem’ if you are going to write about it. not everyone likes reading Harems and getting invested in the story and later facing trash plot like harem ugh...

The power ups are way too much, mf got all three haki while they haven't even reached Logue town. Also his attitude bro why are you even on the crew if you're gonna act like you're above the captain??? Also, harem? No warnings about that? Really had to drop after reading the part where he hugs nami during arlong Arc and whispers some embarassing stuff, actually made me physically cringe holy!

Overall story quite good MC quite strong with current timeline But need editing for name (focus) Quite important for story in one piece Jdsksjsksjdjxjdjdjdkxjxjxhdjdkdkdkdjxdkkdkdkxkxkxxkxkxjxjxjxjxjxjxjkxkskskzkxzkkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkz

Raw ? .

hello . first of all thanks for writing this kind of story . I am an author myself and i know how hard it is to write . but please continue this story . this is a genuine good story

it's pretty good finally something worth Reading

first of all, the grammar and naming of certain stuff is horrendous, this is a badly done wish fulfilment.. like instantly giving mastered 6 styles n all instead of him training it, and MC is bipolar or somethin first he says how he's gonna make luffy his soldier, then joins him and asks to be 1st mate(i don't mind joining luffy, since that's best for his system), and i honestly don't like how the MC acts either(just a personal preference)

I don't know why people are calling this bad I thoroughly enjoyed it and credit should be given when it's due. Yes I know they should be critical but at least have a good reason and not just say, "He joined Luffy in chapter 1 and so it's bad," Like???? Anyway I hope you write more and more I love this story

Nice story so far Editor need editing for early chapter to more better translation Need more story dhdudkdhdhshzgshhasgshsbzgshsjsgsjbsbssbbsshhshzhzuzuzhzhzhzhzhzhzhzjzjzjzjzjznzhzhjzjanzbzhzjzjznznznznznznnznz