Naruto: About the Fact That my Brother is Madara
Kyōsuke got reincarnated into the world of Naruto in the Warring States period and became an ordinary member of the Uchiha clan.
At this time, Uchiha Madara was still just a teenager, the God of Shinobi was still pondering how to make World Peace, Black Zetsu was plotting how to split the moon to save his mother, and the enigmatic Jigen was quietly chanting sutras in a secluded temple.
The young Kyōsuke stepped onto the battlefield, but fortunately, he awakened a Point Redemption System, allowing him to trade points earned by killing enemies for various abilities.
[Tenseigan, SSS-level item, requires 200,000 points to exchange.]
[Divine Tree Seed, SSS-level item, requires 200,000 points to exchange.]
[Truth-Seeking Orbs, SSS-level ability, requires 200,000 points to exchange.]
[Yamotsu Hirasaka, SS-level ability, requires 100,000 points to exchange.]
Uchiha Madara: "Kyōsuke, you and I as brothers can surely annihilate the Senju Clan together!"
Senju Hashirama: "My friend, let’s realize the dream of building Konoha Village together!"
Black Zutsu: "Help me save my mother!"
Uzumaki Mito: "You promised to marry me—are you trying to go back on your word?"
Otsutsuki Kaguya: "This is bad! The clan’s law enforcement team is here. Kyōsuke, defend against them with me!"
Otsutsuki Isshiki: "Impossible! How do you know my unique eye technique?!"
Uchiha Kyōsuke: "Impossible? Please, I can even hit the moon!"
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Raw: 火影：关于我兄弟是斑爷这档事
Author: 闲者阿七
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Hey everyone, the author here! This is my debut novel and my first foray into Naruto fanfiction. I know I'm a bit late with the review, but I would really appreciate it if you could leave one—it helps me a lot! Nevertheless, after reading through the fanfiction, I genuinely feel this is one of the best stories set during Naruto's "Warning State" era. The main character is not only cool and smart but also ruthless and fully aware of his actions. That said, no story is without its flaws. For instance, the MC's system—what kind of system gives points for killing people? The character could essentially wipe out the entire Shinobi population! Despite this, the story remains a fantastic read. The pacing is strong, and the MC doesn’t overly rely on the system to gain power; he works tirelessly to grow stronger on his own. There may still be a few mistakes I've missed along the way. If you spot any, please don’t hesitate to point them out. I'm always open to feedback and constantly working on improving my writing! Lastly, I genuinely believe this story is amazing, and I've put a lot of effort into making it the best it can be for you. If you have any questions, feel free to comment on this review. Thank you so much for reading, and I hope you enjoy this journey through the Shinobi world as much as I have enjoyed creating it.
just from the description alone you can tell this is a 💩 translation
the story is pretty good. the only complaints that I have is the lack of consistency in power levels of the mc. at one time he is peak jonin, in the next, he is getting dogged by a counterpart at the same rank. the writing quality is very good with no mistakes. The story is developing quite well. it lacks depth in certain areas, but overall entertaining enough to be called a worthwhile read. characters are multi dimensional. not like the typical chinese bs. i suppose the translator is heavily editing it. The world background is limited at the moment but we are only at 35 chapters. so there is plenty of time.
There are so many freaking inconsistencies in this story. And many times the author just makes shit up to advance the plot without any reason or sense. I could ignore a few of them but these plot inconsistencies continue to happen chapter after chapter after chapter. And it gets really annoying after a time. The plot line itself isn't actually bad. But the way it's written makes me feel that the author believes all his readers to be a bunch of retards.
Young author, I commend you for this. The start won't be pleasant and you will receive a lot of negative reviews but let it not affect you. Take this as gaining experience from negative comments just as the mc gains points from kills. Grow with it and transform for the better. Be wise.
Continue! Don't drop it! 🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆
Великолепная и необычная история. Очень рад, что на нее наткнулся. Здесь мы можем наблюдать как появление еще одного героя в эпоху войны кланов серьёзно так меняет историю)
Good character development. I can’t wait to see the next chapter
Entertaining and more original than average. The system is not disproportionate, It's a bit odd that a simple chakra recovery potion costs 10,000 points, but... Details. The story is not perfect, there are boring arcs like the puppet war, but the story in general, as I said, is more original than average.
Actually good fic, the translations needs some what more refining. But overall its very good. Actually good fic, the translations needs some what more refining. But overall its very good. Actually good fic, the translations needs some what more refining. But overall its very good.Actually good fic, the translations needs some what more refining. But overall its very good.
The story is quite good, it is quite pleasant to read each chapter, although it has a system that does not make it extremely powerful from one moment to the next. the translator does a great job, keep it up my friend
more please 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Hasta el momento va bien, esperemos como evoluciona la trama, buen trabajo, buen trabajo.... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=proud][img=proud][img=strong][img=strong]
Мне очень понравилась эта история. Классно сделанная система, которая вроде и имба, но не настолько дисбалансная. В общем потрясающая работа, жду продолжения
Eu adorei está novel, Perfeita. Um bom desenvolvimento dos personagens, desenvolvimento muito legal do mundo Naruto e também sem crossover de poderes de outros universos.um possível ponto fraco é o baixo desenvolvimento da Mito mas possível que esteja no Patreon mas mesmo assim que novel excelente e um ótima tradução. Bom trabalho.