The Transcendent Godslayer
Eons have passed since the prophesied godslayer met his demise. Yet, in a world reborn, whispers stir of his return, of a new man born from the remnants of an ancient prophecy.
Kallen, destined to master the delicate balance between chaos and order, light and darkness, emerges to defy the very fabric of fate.
Existence is a tapestry, one whole, connected, and indivisible. It is woven by the fabric of fate, spun with the strings of karma, and stitched with the threads of causality.
Yet, within this unity lies individuality, and this individuality is the essence of existence. The manifestation of essence is Will.
But what is a sparked Will against one akin to a raging inferno? What is a child before a mammoth? The conviction of a mortal before the boundless Will of cosmic beings?
The answer is defiance!.
A defiant Will, is what Kallen needs to liberate himself from the suppression every mortal endures from apex lifeforms. To live his life free, unhinged and on his own terms.
But it takes a bit of crazy to be brave, and Insanity to be defiant.
This is the story of a mortal breaking limits to achieve Apexification, to walk with his head held high and free in every corner of the universe.
It is the irony of a slave who holds the reins, even as their chains bite deep. It is the cry of a heart bound in servitude, yet refusing to surrender its essence.
Yeah, the during the first few chapters of my read, I came into the conclusion that this novel seemed to lean more on traditional than webnovel. I don't have anything to criticize about your writing since I think It's pretty solid. But as a webnovel addicted, I could say that maybe I'm feeling a bit off about the pacing and the tone? I wasn't really that engage in the first few chapters, Like, Chapter 7 and above were the chapters that perked my interest. That is where the story seemed to have begun. But as a insane dopamine addict, the chapter 1-6 was a bit boring. Like sure, there are actions, but there is no attachment. The Mc was introduced during the battle, but its's my first time reading the MC? How can I root for him if I don't know him? And also, some chapters are a bit to descriptive for my liking. After saying this, I felt like I just slapped myself since I'm very notorious for being draggy. Oh how much I wish I'm not blind when it comes to my own novel. But still, it think this novel is great. Definitely recommended for people who liked medium paced novels with solid foundations from the start. 1 power stone to you. (I don't have any more) (っ.❛ ᴗ ❛.)っ
An interesting read thus far, but I can't really say much considering the book is still in it's very early stages. However I will say the characters are distinct, nuanced and very interesting, the characters are engaging and the dialogue is top notch. Improve your writing quality however, especially in the aspects of paragraphing and cliffhangers, I guess that's where you're a bit lacking. I see great potential for your work however. Keep up the good work author, let's enjoy this together
This book is great after chapter 7. Like it will hook you up. The first few chapters, however, feel more like a glossary turned story. Maybe a little more compact for the first few chapters would do great! But that's my take, you can ignore it if you want, author. So yeah, I agree with the previous reviewers that stated that the story began after ch7. The writing is great overall, no comments on that. Keep going Author, you'll do great!
Each word was like an obstacle, a maze... Crafted to keep readers busy and hooked... I commend you
I would say your story is very good for beginners and blood-pumping scene but i mainly like either calm, comedic or romance type novel with singlefemalelead thus, i mostlikeIy wouldn't read it but what i remembered about this type privious novels your is pretty standard not bad or not extraordinary. Good luck!
Honestly, I saw the need for another review because this is gold. Author, I must give you my respects. When I said there was need for improvement, I never expected a total revolution. You have outdone yourself on this one. Did I say the characters were good before? Now I'm saying they're out of this world. The dynamics, dialogues, everything is peak. I really wish it was two chapters or more per day. The book is just that good. The build ups definitely pays out. Especially the recent chapters, I didn't see such novelty coming. You have my respects.
The story is turning out better than I imagined, thought it would be one of those edgy OP novels but I guess I was wrong. Authors doing a really good job creating something like this. I love the multiple world vibes plus the part about pods in heaven is hilarious 🤣😂. Bro you crack me up. Still I'd like to point out it's giving me RI vibes, regarding the MC that is. All in all it's not half bad. Keep it up Light speed, your not half bad kid😁✨
the start was a little drawn out but not too bad and not the typical cliche but still a little. but then the story kind of gets moving until you see that the mc is just going to always be subdued and passive when interacting with people then when he is out of sight he acts like everything is in the palm of his hands when he is just mr passive go with the flow and dont actually do anything. boring and uninteresting.
Nice work author. decided to drop my review today I'm enjoying the book. also nice cliffhangers as of recent, and I can't wait for the next update I hv been waiting for the action for long. it's only 13 chapters, but I still want to see the fight scenes and I guess that will be in the next update. this is an incredible work, that i highly recommend everybody reads, very engaging.
I like it I just kept getting lost especially in the beginning but when I figured what’s going on it picks up