Good premise for a story. OP does his homework, this much is obvious. That being said, this story is in need of context. I feel like I get 60% of the story... I want the other 40% that is trapped in OPs head.
Good premise for a story. OP does his homework, this much is obvious. That being said, this story is in need of context. I feel like I get 60% of the story... I want the other 40% that is trapped in OPs head.