The Tale of The Fallen Primordials

I hope you enjoy it, I put many hours into it to make sure it's perfect, and I would upload a new chapter every 3 days to a week, Enjoy

Truly amazing! The world-building was rich, and the characters felt so real, I couldn’t help but root for them. I need the next chapter now! If you love immersive fantasy, this is a must-read!

chop chop, drop the next chapter, this is lovely

I love the names, also the the worlds are remarkable. Overall this is a really nice book Hoping to see more like this and more from the author

v v v v v v v v v. Really good.

Not a bad read, I find it enjoyable yes The exposition to begin with tho kinda threw me off other than that it's good. Looking forward to see how the story develops to intrigue me

This novel comes highly recommended by many, and based on its reputation, it seems like a must-read for fans of [genre]. The premise itself is intriguing, as it promises a blend of [themes in the book] with [author’s style or focus]. The characters appear to be well-developed, with many readers commenting on how relatable or compelling they are. Additionally, the pacing seems to balance action and introspection, making it engaging without being too overwhelming. Readers also mention that the author does a fantastic job of weaving complex narratives, ensuring that each subplot contributes to the overall story. While I have not yet had the chance to personally read it, I look forward to exploring its rich world and seeing why it has garnered such positive feedback. Based on the reviews, it seems like a novel that will leave a lasting impact

Definitely love the world building, characterization is pretty dope and intriguing. Needs more dialogues to me, but in all, a great book. Love to see more chapters mate

The quality of the writing is definitely above average. The world building is simply short of amazing and the characters are very interesting. I just hope the author doesn't slack and keep putting in their best.

The strength of the novel lies in its use of descriptive words and storytelling. Very helpful, helps visualizing the events that take place in the book The main plot point atp, though engaging, arrives unexpectedly leaving some of my questions unanswered. A bit fast paced but it's okay It's got potential 🔥 and. the world building too, it's peak work

It's not just a novel , it's a rousing success ,a very vibrant and wonderful book , with well tailored worlds and great characters , awesome work

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I love noir, the twin dynamic is beauty, I also love the exposition, but can you add a bit more details to the characters so we can better visualize them, like their outfit and looks

can you add images to help visualize it more in other chapters?