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From the Elder Chronicles, preserved in the Sanctum of Eldor
Six centuries ago, a new force breathed itself into the world — a power not born of incantation nor drawn from relics, but awakened from within. The ancients called it Maind, the First Pulse — pure, unfiltered life-force. In time, it came to be known by a simpler name: Hit.
Across the scattered kingdoms of the realm, magic had long flickered in the hands of the few — charms and rituals, arcane glyphs, elemental whispers. But none could compare to the concentrated brilliance of Hit as it bloomed within the borders of Miravalia. It was here, in lands closest to the Source, that the first wielders arose.
Two brothers: Justice Lee, whose heart beat with purpose, and Matteo Lee, whose ambition eclipsed reason. Bound by blood, divided by vision. Justice sought to unite and protect; Matteo hungered to remake and rule. They were the first to awaken to Hit — and they were the first to nearly shatter the realm with its full fury.
In their final battle, in the Cave of Galmoria, Justice struck down Matteo at the cost of his own life. But he did not vanish. His soul, burning with all he had become, poured itself into the Eternal Flame — a spectral ember waiting to pass to one deemed worthy.
That ember now stirs again.
And so begins the tale.
The tale of nations on the edge of war.
Of bloodlines that carry secrets.
Of one boy who inherits the mark.
The Hit.
The Eternal Flame.
Will he succumb to the darkness or harness the Eternal Flame power to protect the kingdom and it's people?
It's very nice 👍. Keep the good work up. The fantasy is putting my brain's imagination to work after a very long time. But, remember to work on typos.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Great work for an upcoming writer. I love the setup and plot but I think the story might be moving a bit too fast 😁