Healing System

Thank you for checking out my book, I'm updating my previous review. The book has shifted toward the harem route, but of course, it's not going to be with 10+ girls, only 3-5 at most. Beginning chapters might be rough, and the writing is amateurish, but I hope most can bear through it. Romance is not going to start for a while, as it only truly began blossoming in Volume 4. Once again, apologies to the no-harem readers, however, I disliked the way romance was progressing, and frankly, changing it outright felt like the only decision I could make. Thank you for checking the book out. Your thoughts are appreciated, as you will contribute to the betterment of my future works!

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I love fast pace books but Between the random timeskips , and the fragmented memories the plot is a bit hard to keep track on and it’s hard to see development in the story / characters I’m nearly on the 200th chap and mc has no friends, no home , no love interest barley shows up to the academy since he’s travelling around so much , cool powers can only get u so far I need some development somewhere else

sigh... the only reason I read this even though the story was all over the place is because it was a very very very rare r18 no-harem. Now it is no longer that. I am very sad.

The author knows how to write, the story has a good continuity, but has many problems creating dialogues beyond a statement and an answer, making the character development shallow, only having conversations with the system while the other characters are mere shadows in the story. The world development is interesting as long as it is possible to see that there is something interesting, the author uses the resource of mystery a lot and that there is something bigger behind it, which is interesting but if we don't have any answers it makes the reading weak, I read 70 chapters and so far there has not been an arc where there was a definitive answer about something leaving the reader lost (through Google Translate)

It was very entertaining the main character felt well developed and over all just fun N-gagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagaga gagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagag

It's all a bit disjointed with time skips, dreams, memories and characters that are never explained.

MC has ho self awareness. Thinks he can negotiate everything with everyone.

Just a generic review. It's 3.0 cuz idk the story but something has to be rated so here it is ig. Anyway, this word count thingy is very annoying I gotta say. Hopefully, this padding text will somewhat reach it but apparently this much is still not enough so here I am, typing.

Very very very very Very very very very Very very very very Very very very very Very very very very Very very very very Very very very very Very very very very Very very very very good

The fact that the author made the novel that he was promoting as strictly no harem into a harem novel is disgusting. Spoiler ahead: So you mean to tell me that he just switched halfway? LMAO what? Bro you don’t know what you’re writing, did you think making it harem would get you more readers? No, it just removed all the dedicated readers you previously had I for one loved the story, matter of fact I even went ahead and read to the part where he got his dragon abilities, yet somehow you decided to add harem into this mix? Yeah aight

Very nice novel allso has very nice progress and no plot holes so far

it started about healing for the first 25 to 30 chapters. Then, it became all about fighting and seamed as if the MC used healing as a secondary.

So far its really good and interesting. I'm looking forward to reading more and will do another review once i have caught up to the currently released chapters.