SHADOW SLAVE: HEIR OF ABYSS
Author: GREY_000
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Growing up in an orphanage supported by the Valor clan, Wren was now selected by a saint of valor clan to groom him and other selected candidates for the nightmare seed which was now growing inside of them after their small adventure in the dream realm. Follow him, to unveil his mysterious origins and his upcoming future.
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It's very good and although I'm at the beginning I'd say it's currently better than 80% of the shadow slave fanfics Anyways I don't know what else to write so amma just write random stuff till I can post this review
Uhm keeping this shameless author bullshit aside, I will tell you more about this story and It's execution both of them a re really poor when I write I sometimes feel to just shoot a bullet in my head. However, the story is rather a little interesting it is not now but will become in future, specially in the 2nd and 3rd Nightmare. So I will try to keep up my updating and also wish you guys good luck if you can follow me and our main character in the journey.
It's okay for a beginner, but it's too boring and meaningless. First, you could think through the main character's personality and how it fits into the story. He seems like a madman—I know because I've seen madmen—they're inconsistent, just like the main character. And you shouldn't make the same mistakes as the author; a meaningless time skip isn't necessary.
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Please stop using AI to rewrite some section of your novel. Its blatantly clear to anyone who knows or cares. Just use quilbot if you want some editing done. Or hell yet you can still talk to chagpt about how your story goes. But don't let it rewrite shit. It ends up sounding bland and like a carbon copy style of every other work that uses it