Trials of Destiny: Way of The Sword
Jin, a user of ki and trained by his master, Roshio until a war broke out and his master died due to sacrificing himself to save Jin. Jin who was in tears vowed to get revenge of the bastards who had started this and killed his master, and his clan members. Being the only survivor of the Bone Structure Palace, The master had handed Jin a weapon to form a contract with. Offically being the master of an broken palace that no longer exists. What will he do to get his revenge? What is he willing to sacrifice for it.
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1. I would like to firstly say that this is my first time writing, so don't expect everything to be perfect for a while.
2. This story is a slow/fast-paced reading. It'll have a mix of both. Some chapters will feel slower because it is, and others will feel faster because it is.
3. It does have romance in it and I wasn't sure to add cultivation because it's more like meditation and like ki gathering and things. However, after going through my thoughts, it was basically the same thing, so I just did it.
4. It's a little all over the place for I'd say the first 6–8 chapters maybe more? But It'll will slowly come together, hopefully…
5. If you do enjoy this, make sure to give it a review and ask other people to read!
6. If there are any questions at all, ask in the comments, and I'll be answering questions every 10 chapters.
7. So update to the list above ^
Romance has been removed due to it taking the first slot and having it show up primarily (I think primarily) as romance and not showing the others before you click on the actual book. It'll still have romance, so don't worry. Nothing will change
8. I would also like to clarify that this is an original work by me, and the clothes i decided to use for the characters, "hanfu" mainly, I do not mean any disrespect to anyone by using it as a novel that is made within america if anyone thought anything like that. I'm simply doing it because i like the design and i think they look extremely cool and also beautiful to me. So again i don't mean any disrespect if im wording any of it wrong. I just really like them.
I wrote a review of this book a while back, and since then, I’ve kept an open mind about it. Honestly, it’s quite good. While it’s not the kind of novel that makes me say, “Wow, this is the best writing I’ve ever seen!” it does have a unique charm. The power system, for instance, is unlike anything I’ve come across before, which adds a fresh layer to the story. The interactions between Jin and the other characters are often interesting, though at times they feel a bit forced. Some chapters feel overly detailed, which might just be a personal preference on my part, but as of now, the writing quality has noticeably improved compared to the first chapter. I also really enjoy the character designs—they’re creative and stood out enough to get me interested into seeing other characters, even though I have my own preferences when it comes to characters (but I won’t dive into that). That said, I think the pacing could use some work. In some sections, the story feels like it’s dragging, while in others, it moves too quickly. The world-building is intriguing, but I feel like the story could benefit from a chapter dedicated to explaining more about the world—its history, lore, and overall context. Adding some insight into the past would help enrich the setting and give readers a deeper understanding of the story. Overall, this novel has come a long way, and I’m looking forward to seeing how it continues to grow and develop.
This is truly the peak of novels of this era. 11/10 chefs kiss. You truly have cooked. This is like watching a movie. Beautiful 😭 Peaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkjj
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