Dragonborne with Origin System

Great backstory let's see!!! The power system too unique I think..I have read my own shares of novels especially those of system genre so since the backdrop looks cool hope for more dramatic and character involved story instead of cliche arrogant mc slapping everyone flaunting his hierarchy...do a good job..good luck

Interesting story keep up the good work and improve the action scenes And add up new characters and also please give moreeeee chapterssss am dying to readdd

Amazing story! The blend of action and emotion is perfect, and the suspense is gripping. I’m hooked and can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep it going.

it's a good novel, one of a kind. hope to see more in the future

Very good story wood recommend. Hope the author

Good world background good writing quality and not bland grammar with depth and updates is also good story development needs to pace up with new characters

Writing is good but you need to introduce more characters it's already been 17 chapters and I hope you do something new in the next chapters and ofcrse i wish u good luck keep up

Good story keep the goooooood woooorkkkk and ofcrse the story heeeell good neeeeeeds moreeeee chapterrrrrs to knowwwwwww Keep upppp gooooodbwork brooo

Good story good characters good background keep going so the work as you have done keep up the work and I'll provide my complete support to you...keep the mc same

Wonderful story with great background and ...hope you continue to do so and bring a really interesting and unique story...also your work get recognised more .I have seen ording and pace it's great too

Great backstory let's see!!! The power system too unique I think..I have read my own shares of novels especially those of system genre so since the backdrop looks cool hope for more dramatic and character involved story instead of cliche arrogant mc slapping everyone flaunting his hierarchy...do a good job..good luck

Really good backstory and setting for future ...hoping to see good plot and character development...Ray to be adult and cold in academy arc ..and other characters to i hope they have unique characters of thier own

Great backstory let's see!!! The power system too unique I think..I have read my own shares of novels especially those of system genre so since the backdrop looks cool hope for more dramatic and character involved story instead of cliche arrogant mc slapping everyone flaunting his hierarchy...do a good job..good luck

Great backstory let's see!!! The power system too unique I think..I have read my own shares of novels especially those of system genre so since the backdrop looks cool hope for more dramatic and character involved story instead of cliche arrogant mc slapping everyone flaunting his hierarchy...do a good job..good luck

Wonderful story with great background and setup ...hope you continue to do so and bring about a really interesting and unique story . ..also hope your work get recognised more .I have seen the wording and pace it's great too