DxD: Scion of Lucifuge
Transmigrated into the world of High School DxD, Roy believed he had been handed a life of luxury and glory. Born into the prestigious Lucifuge family, with his Sister Grayfia as his strict yet devoted older sister, he thought he was destined for greatness.
99,997… 99,998… 99,999… 100,000!!
But... reality proved harsher: Roy lacked demonic talent and, despite years of training, remained a Low-Class Devil. his peers effortlessly achieve High-Class status, he’s been trapped in a cycle of endless sword practice and ridicule. Yet, he refused to accept mediocrity. Ten thousand sword swings a day, relentless training.. Until one day..
[Ding! The Strongest Demon King System has been activated. Access functions to learn more.]
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- High School DxD - Main World!
1 - High School of the Dead [●] - First - World Traveled
2 - Demon Slayer [●] - Second - World Traveled
3 - Akame Ga Kill [●] - Third - World Traveled
4 - Bladedance of Elementalers [●] - Fourth - World Traveled
5 - ???
From what I've seen so far, the story looks very promising.
A piece of advice: it's better to drop the third-person objective narration style; it's too much tell, never show. Use subjective or even omniscient. We, as readers, want some connection to the inner world of MC, and here, we get none. It's a character-driven story, not a thriller.
The story is not bad, but I don't like "catch all pokemon" vibe. There's no resistance, they are brainwashed by the devil pieces. Mc just do whatever he wants and everything works out. I don't like the fact that he can use infinite amount of devil pieces, because that means he can use more than one on a single person, but he doesn't do that also - a waste.
A bit idealistic gets a system for unlimited servants just one saeko eleavated his power by one level for some reason also he is 16 whil his sister is hundreds of years old where are his parents none of it is said pure wish fulfillment fic I prefer the other dxd novel much better with a better mc and story development among other things
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All you really need to know is that there really isnt any thoughts going through his head. The story goes from point a to point b to point c, theres no side thoughts or goals, the MC is overly blunt and everyone agrees with him. Other characters dont really have any thoughts of their own and takes the MC's words at face value. its most shown in the meeting with Urodaki in the latest chapter.
Really good story, we will see what gonna happen next.,............................................................................,................................................................................... .....
Solo puedo decir esto: Tremenda obra maestra 20/10 y god
Nice is this fanfic a Chinese fanfic if so does anybody it’s name
Honestly a lot of potential here, But Really you made this into a pokemon Harem story only about girls girls girls no foreshadowing no risks no excitement all about girls this is getting boring I hardly read 25 chapters maybe remake it and focus on story action adventure no harem for one pls
i have read 25 chapter of this book and i am already addicted to this book please don't drop this book ever
Hm hm this story is everything I need and a full-fledged one so yes op
Honestly I tried looking for raw or mtl version but omg they are all so terrible and all over the place. the story get messy and chaotic so props to you for proper translating that mess
Great FanFiction I love it Don't drop it And Please add Daki in the harem MC ❤️❤️❤️❤️🔥❤️🔥 …………. ………. …… …. .. . . . .
My review up to the 4th chapter! for me the story is very good, there are no mistakes in writing, and it is constantly being updated, but I don't know if the author will keep this pace, but as long as it is updated daily or weekly for me it's great!