Pioneer of Humanity(40KXDC)
Author: GeneralBlack
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İt is the 40th millennium. The prosperity and peace of The Golden age collapsed in a forgotten history. Flames of battle and the dread of Old Night buried the mighty technology of mankind to the sands of time most to never resurface. In this era Pioneer of Humanity, Architect of the golden age Noah Light accepts his death with dignity and peace. Yet he gets reincarnated into the mysterious world of DC."Only in death does duty end. So that was a fucking lie."
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Writing quality: 3 - the writing itself seems fine enough, but that is not the problem writing quality: 3 - due to limited chapters, I will just give an average score of 3 Character design: 4 - love the character, hate how you used them World background: 4 - I love that you had him start in 2k and live to 40k, I would have preferred you had stuck to Warhammer instead of ,DC though story development: 1 - I wrote a few comments in the chapters due to my confusion at those moments, but it feels like you had written those three chapters in reverse, you should have wrote it like Meet the god guy in the afterlife, go to 2k with an enhanced mind, develop stably till 20 with countless hidden plans and organizations in place, team up with the emperor and bros to accelerate the empire development while your plans active to enhance the empire strength, gain hidden stcs, and sabotage alien development else where, finally during the last 10k prevent any traitor primarch by installing shit on the birthed so they don't land in the bad planets or some shit, live to 40k and use black plyons and ctan shards to reinforce reality barrier, have none warp ftl and communication, and ether engine the fuck out of the warp for energy wait I seemed to had gotten distracted while writing that, so basically I felt like you wrote the first three chapters in reverse, then abandoned your epic warhammer idea to go fuck around with a symbiotic that he should shot on sight due to how many battles he had with aliens, or burn due to the fact that they are essential the null gods information gatherers and army
Haven’t read it yet but I saw your comment on Primarch of liberty so I have come to check it out!!!
love it looking forward to this story ..
To develop humanity in th DC universe. You have to become a Mix man The one who has the heart of a saint (Kindness) & Steel First of Tyrant (Cruelty).
Shameless author review here. This my first fanfiction so there will be mistakes and I hope your criticism for them.I hope you enjoy this
Amazing concept the characters are engaging But the updates are abysmal showing the author lacks mastery over both of the universes lore. Overall 10/10 because I am amazing. Just kidding 7/10 there is definitely ones that are far better.