Naruto: Tenseigan Eye

Haven't read it but just want to tell you that you should give chapter names so that i can skim through and get a idea of what i am getting into.

This is a really good fanfic. Highly recommended. This is a typical MC who's OP but hides his strength, but he uses schemes to do it instead of actually showing himself as weak. The love interest seems to be Tsunade.

The translation is decent, and the concept is intriguing. That's all I can and will say. but for the sake of the review I'll add on that i like the Tenseigan.

The Novel was quite good here are my pros and cons , before you guys want to read it. Pros : 1) Mc is a bit smart and calculating 2) Mc doesn't expose his Tenseigan eye ,but clearly says it says a blood line degeneration and shifts the focus to puppets . 3) Story is a bit slow-paced ,but there are a few time skips it makes the overall interaction with the characters in the story more entertaning . 4) Mc gets a deputy postion for anbu under tsunade (so he can freely work on his puppet experiments.) 5) Takes minato as his disciple and prevents Nawaki's death. Cons : 1) Author doesn't explain the Mc's background or how he got his eye to evolve . 2) Author doesn't mention his past history or when he was reincarnated at all (skips the academy arc entirely). 3) At start it's a bit boring and bland . 4) Mc is very stubborn refusing to learn any new jutsu's and overly relies on tenseigan ability's . 5) Mc is a snitches on nawaki :) 6) Until now there were no major fights as Mc wipes out his enemies with his auto puppets or decimates a few villages with his truth-seeking ball (without anyone seeing him). 7) Author makes the 3rd hokage's iq very stupid and Danzo is even worse .

This is that novel where the Mc literally never fights, he just uses puppets to deal with stuff but never acts himself. Not my style, but the translation is phenomenal, 10/10

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4.2 2 stars on writing quality translator is a lazy editor and story wise... YOU GOT TO SHUT DOWN YOUR NARUTO KNOWLEDGE HERE AND YOUR BRAIN TOO. JUST READ LIKE ITS AN ALTERNATIVE UNIVERSE 4 stars on character design inconsistencies on MC's character and skill design, why? Just read. again, you have to turn off your brain on this one while reading

Honestly speaking this is a pretty good fic overall the translating forties pretty much one of the best I've seen so far the main character is pretty smart in comparison to a lot of other similar fics that's a plus but one of the main problems I'm not giving it full marks is that it gets one of my pet peeves of the main character hiding his abilities for little to no reason and in the beginning I can kind of understand because he's not powerful enough yet but once you hit a certain point you might as well just show off your power cuz no one can stop you at that point in time but no he continues to hide it

pretty decent novel especially for a translated one not filled with insane amount of propaganda and less dick swinging contests UK . Also if anyone knows the raw name pls tell me

This Naruto fanfic is pretty cool. I’m glad to see another eye getting some love besides the Sharingan, which is rare in most Naruto fanfics. The editing and translation could definitely use some work, though—I've noticed some character names are misspelled or change from one paragraph to the next (not a huge deal if you just go with it). But honestly, I can’t keep reading because the story hasn’t really progressed since the first chapter. I’ve made it through over 200 chapters, and it feels like not much has happened compared to other Naruto fics I’ve checked out. If you’re okay with that, then go for it—I really do think it’s a solid story.

An amazing story with a very good translation thank you author for this blessing................................................................................................................

Translation and story is awsm. but i read mtl after this, found Naruto plot is dragged, too much for my taste. only enjoyable till 150-200 chaps.

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So far so good the pupets were very nexpected but it’s fun