Avatar: Chaos Water
Water is part of our body, they say it is life, but in the hands of our protagonist it becomes the most dangerous poison, the deadliest weapon and the most unpredictable thing.
Blood control, water temperature control, steam to fight and ice to throw! Have you stopped feeling your fingers? Oops, now they're purple, too bad. Want to emulate a certain super soldier? I'll make you popsicles or give you popsicles!
Water is quite unpredictable and ever-changing, and although much of it was explored in the original series, Shisui has an idea of the interesting things you can do with this element.
But before all that fun, why the hell was a Waterbender born in the Fire Nation?
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Is obvius that this Fanfic is an AU.
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you know mc is something special when he is the only one with a japanese name in the world. Also the sequence of events in relation to his identity makes it impossible for mc to navigate fire nation society without being killed before maturity. especially within near proximity with royalty.
this story is really amazing. long chapter, interesting story line, very good character interactions, and more importantly MC has his brain still healthy... he knew very what he is doing, not outright rejecting fire nation like some other FF. the only flaw is lacking chapter, so i would like to asking the AUTHOR about More chapter please....
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Meh. WQ 5/5 SoU 2/5 SD 3/5 CD 4/5 WB 3/5 Overall 3.4/5
Dear god where do I begin, characters are meh some are good but the majority didn’t have that much depth, the pacing is DOGWATER, also apparently the author likes to nerf his mc, couldn’t even beat a 4 year old azula bro had to rely on his cheat bruh, conclusion story is below average grammar isn’t that bad could use some work, world building doesn’t need to be explained it’s literally ATLA, in the end i didn’t like it, it just wasted my time
Without much discussion, 5 stars for this new novel. Do not read anyone’s opinions or any other nonsense. Go and read the novel with a heart of steel.
The story gets better every time I read the chapters, I can't even wait for more chapters. ...............................................................................
It's a very good read so far, I hope the story continues as it has and doesn't get dropped.
A unique take on the Avatar world. I love how it focuses on the world building and the advancements the fire nation is making. Also how the royal family is not so dysfunctional anymore. And from the bottom of my heart I thank thee for not using chatgpt to edit the story. I loath those stories with it even though the concept of the whole story is excellent. Thank you for using grammarly.
I already love this I never see Avatar fox’s actually try and use science in the way this fic is I hope this story will not get drop
Having read up to chapter 30, as it seems to me, the story just went smoothly into daily routine, absolutely no development in the plot, everything is too boring, everything is too ordinary, everything is too sweet. There are no enemies, no battles, no intrigue, etc, the main character is absolutely ordinary, well yes there are brains and talent in spiritual terms, well that's it. There are not even strong enemies that will make the hero and his team overstep their limits, the romance development between Ang and Katara is too artificial, not alive, puppet-like in general. In general, if you want just everyday life, I recommend it, but if you came for action, intrigue, exciting plot, it's better to look for something else, personally I'm tired of reading monotonous chapters.
Really nice i've already read till around 20 and o have nothing negative to say, the grammar is really good, the plot too and i kind of like how you cover up all the possible plot-holes. Keep up the good work, and don't drop, Cuz if you do i will
I like the beginning but after a while the MC felt like he was steamrolling through all issues and it felt like this was too feel good for my taste. What I’m saying is that the conflict just wasn’t there for me. I felt like he should have struggled a lot more for what was given so easily to him. For example the cultural changes within the Fire nation felt like it should have been much harder to achieve. The changes in Sozan or something seemed like they would be far harder to achieve. One of the reasons why I may think that way is because from my perspective the improvements made by the MC reduced the intesity of the conflict to come. Besides that, I really the story. It feels very well written with a good understanding of the theory of bending and the complexity of the characters.