The Heart Of Chaos
In a world where power is defined by rank and noble lineage produces only prodigies, Abaddon was born powerless. For fourteen years, he endured relentless humiliation, scorn, and bullying—both from society and his own family.
Everything changed in a single night. Amid a hellish enemy attack, Abaddon witnessed the one person who had always stood by his side—his mother—fall at the hands of their foes. Her final scream echoed in his ears, marking the start of his transformation.
Through trials and tribulations, Abaddon finally gained the power to rewrite his fate. In a world ruled by rankers, a single spark ignites chaos. Abaddon embarks on a perilous journey to uncover the truth behind his mother’s death. Along the way, he battles powerful foes, acquires ancient skills and techniques, and uncovers forgotten mysteries. From sealed catacombs to mythical lands where the roars of legendary beasts shake the earth, Abaddon navigates a world teeming with diverse races and enigmatic entities.
Driven by vengeance, his resolve is unshakable.
“Even if I must fight the gods themselves—or become one—I will have my revenge!”
Welcome to the Land of Aeons, a dark and unforgiving world where survival depends solely on strength and skill. Join Abaddon and his allies on an epic journey through this treacherous land.
Hi, Blacq_Crow here. First off, I want to say this novel is written by a newbie, so please don’t expect too much. While the writing might not compare to some of the famous authors out there, it’s also not the worst. I’m still learning and growing through this experience—writing is definitely more challenging than I thought it would be! Still, it’s something I’m passionate about and enjoy doing, even if the road isn’t always easy. A huge thank you to everyone who’s been with me on this journey so far—Ar_t, LetterZns, and many others—your support means the world to me. Without giving away any spoilers, if you’re into rich and diverse fantasy worlds, you’ve come to the right place. Not blowing my own horn, but I can promise there’s a lot of exciting adventure and mystery ahead. Sure, I’m still working on pacing and improving my craft, but the story has potential, and I’d love for you to give it a try. Your comments, votes, and reviews mean everything—they’re the fuel that keeps me going, even on my toughest days. So, if you have feedback or suggestions, please share them. Every bit of advice helps me grow as a writer, and I’m looking forward to improving with each chapter. Thank you for joining me on this journey!
The story has a lot of potential, and I'm enjoying the world and character development so far, however the pacing in the first nine chapters feels a bit slow, particularly due to the detailed synopsis, which reveals too much of the plot upfront. Thiss somewhat diminishes the element of surprise and makes it feel like the real story doesn’t begin until the pact with th primordial Chaos. Anyway I'm looking forward to seeing where the author takes this…