Oliver Williams was walking calmly through the streets until he stepped wrong and fell into a dark abyss.
A strange gacha appears in front of him.
[Try your luck]
[A free try for a new world]
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This story will follow the original manga line, so if you don't like it, do not read it.
The upload rate will be 3 of 4 chapters per week.
If you wish, you can follow me or rely on Patreon where there will be more chapters.
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At present read chapter 2 and it is very good. Just hope you won't stop in the middle and continue to regularly update the chapters . Good start.
the beginning is already good, but I hope the author won't give up, I'm still waiting for more chapters......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Es muy buena historia. Espero que hayan mas actualizaciones
La historia esta genial ya que muchos prefieren que el MC no se una a los sombrero de paja, pero a mi me gusta por que se como imaginar la historia y los pequeños cambios que trae el personaje con su influencia. El personaje genial también y si le das la fruta del diablo fenrir ya me lo imagino como Bete de Danmachi. En cuando la pareja ya escribí mi opinión en los comentarios donde sugieres a Vivi. Esta bien y es tu historia pero si se puede votar aun y que cambies de opinión seria genial que fuese la pareja Nami, se que hay algunos fanfics que usan esta pareja pero la mayoría son de harem o están estacados y o abandonados así que seria estupendo ver uno con pareja única siendo OliverxNami, ya que parejas como Robin, Hackond y Vivi he visto bastantes pero con Nami no.
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Esta buena tu historia, pero seria mejor si fuese Harem.
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Before Arlong park it was good but when he got that task or penalty it just became a no for me the ide of his enemies becoming stronger as he dose is not to my taste.
I love your story. I'm eager to see who Oliver's partner will be and how you'll shape their relationship. I just hope it doesn't all end in romance and that it's balanced.
I think it's an incredible story and I would like to read more of it, although what I would say is that you should give more prominence to Oliver who only seems like an extra.
very good i hope the author won't drop this fanfic
Lazy writing. .