In One Piece with Gacha System
Author: KhaUnique
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Oliver Williams was walking calmly through the streets until he stepped wrong and fell into a dark abyss.
A strange gacha appears in front of him.
[Try your luck]
[A free try for a new world]
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This story will follow the original manga line, so if you don't like it, do not read it.
The upload rate will be 3 of 4 chapters per week.
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Lazy writing. .
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Before Arlong park it was good but when he got that task or penalty it just became a no for me the ide of his enemies becoming stronger as he dose is not to my taste.
At present read chapter 2 and it is very good. Just hope you won't stop in the middle and continue to regularly update the chapters . Good start.
the beginning is already good, but I hope the author won't give up, I'm still waiting for more chapters......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Es muy buena historia. Espero que hayan mas actualizaciones
La historia esta genial ya que muchos prefieren que el MC no se una a los sombrero de paja, pero a mi me gusta por que se como imaginar la historia y los pequeños cambios que trae el personaje con su influencia. El personaje genial también y si le das la fruta del diablo fenrir ya me lo imagino como Bete de Danmachi. En cuando la pareja ya escribí mi opinión en los comentarios donde sugieres a Vivi. Esta bien y es tu historia pero si se puede votar aun y que cambies de opinión seria genial que fuese la pareja Nami, se que hay algunos fanfics que usan esta pareja pero la mayoría son de harem o están estacados y o abandonados así que seria estupendo ver uno con pareja única siendo OliverxNami, ya que parejas como Robin, Hackond y Vivi he visto bastantes pero con Nami no.
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Esta buena tu historia, pero seria mejor si fuese Harem.
I think it's an incredible story and I would like to read more of it, although what I would say is that you should give more prominence to Oliver who only seems like an extra.
Hey Author I just wanted to say that you should increase the Mc dialogues/interaction with the whole crew. It feels like I'm just reading one piece instead of watching it through someone present there. Otherwise it is a good fic. Better than many non sensical ones with overpowered mc out there. And can anyone recommend a few good OP fics.
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I love your story. I'm eager to see who Oliver's partner will be and how you'll shape their relationship. I just hope it doesn't all end in romance and that it's balanced.
Story is alright, pretty much just a rehash of canon like usual which is annoying when mc dosent do too much that often. Another thing is that he's a half mink with dog ears, tails, and fur on his limbs but it's never brought up by anyone other than nami one time, they just ignore it which is odd imo. But anyways the story got less interesting when the system changed from just a gacha system to a semi sentient system that changes the world to make enemies stronger if he changes anything in the plot. For example, it showed up during baratie when he knocked Krieg away before he could feed his crew so the system made Arlong's crew stronger with more members and he had to choose to go there or stay at baratie, don't like that at all. There also was a vote or something for the FL and Vivi won over Scathach by one vote, I'm not too much of a fan of vivi and she's a teenager while mc is nearly 30 so that's just weird asf to even add her as an option over someone like Robin. So I won't be reading further since I don't like the system changes, the FL, and not much story difference than canon