Reverend Insanity: The Gacha System

I apologize for being late in reviewing my own work. If anyone has questions, feel free to ask, and I will do my best to answer. Sometimes, I may not fully understand your inquiries, but I will make an effort. I am committed to this project and will continue working on it unless there is a lack of interest. I’m also focusing on improving my writing and story development. I know the pacing was a bit fast at the beginning, so I’m shifting to a slower pace now. Finally, I hope you enjoy my work, and I welcome any suggestions or edits you might have for the fanfic. Thank You

the story is not bad and for the average viewer it is great even, but a competent reader will notice the inconsistent development of character and their nonsensical duality. also, the plot progresses very unrealistically. all in all, a god story if you are okay with dumb, cringy but readable fics

It's kind of amateurish, but not bad. The author uses ChatGPT though, which takes points away. Another thing to note is that the protagonist has a system, which is not something generally appreciated by Reverend Insanity readers.

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إنها أول مره أكتب فيها مراجعه 👍👍👍👍👍👍القصة جيده 👍👍أضف الكثير من الفصول وأيضا الكتابه جيده وأتمنى أن يكون النمو أبطأ وتصميم الشخصية يأخذ 7/10 ولكن دعني أقول أن القصة جيده 👍👍

one of the best RI fanfic out there [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

Surprisingly great 😃 My first thought honestly was , a system in reverend insanity what the hell is this 😒 but as I continued reading I found it to be enjoyable and fun , and the mc who I thought was dumb and too nice lol 😂 he wasn’t dumb or nice but a wolf 🐺 in sheep’s 🐑 clothing which was nice 👍 There’s something he though of that I genuinely think that the thief venerable might have done because he too is an otherworldly demon 😅 Spoiler alert 🚨 Also creating you own path is cool and using otherworldly demons as fuel ⛽️ is some creative evil 😈 mastermind thinking .

finally someone with a system in RI, just for that 5 stars now, come read my opinion in the comments ^^ .........................................

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a new view of RI here and the author did a great job making his own path, I can't wait to read more

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best reverend insanity fic I've ever read.