Charcoal and Toothless: Lycanwing

If you are seriously interested in reading this fanfic, here are some things I recommend. SPOILERS!!! Duhh?? Read Carefully, the writing quality isn't the best, and it can get quite confusing if you are skimming through the chapters. You may be confused as to who the 'Main Character' is due to my previous point (It is Hiccup / Charcoal [Name changes later on]) The story development is good. However, you may find yourself frustrated with the MC as he tends to a very obvious thing (You will understand later) Stick with the novel, and don't be afraid to reread chapters as you may get confused. May only be 34 chapters, but they are quite long. Idea: 5/5 Writing Execution: 2/5 Extra world building on top of httyd verse 5/5 Update stability: ?/5 (was completed when I read it) Side characters: 3/5 (made the vikings look really bad and Stoick was butchered) Overall: It's not bad. I would recommend HTTYD fans to give it a go, but it won't be winning any awards.

This is a great story I am extremely intruiged by this new side to the story! Great work author I thoroughly enjoy this story I would like to give recommendations to increase viewer count 1: Add and image for book title thing: make it using ai or something, image would be a dragonoid 1/2 human 1/2 dragon, aka human with scales and wings and tail represent 1/2 life as human, 1/2 life as dragon Have berk as background on left hand side, then sea, then fog, then dragon island on right hand side Or have the image split in 2 via a lightning strike or a plasma bolt shot by the female nightfury in clouds Have hiccup be split between human and dragon forms ( have image of toothless sitting down for hiccup dragon form, and for human form have him at the forge), same background as last time 2: I would recommend splitting up chapters into smaller chunks Though i enjoy chapter size, you can split up chapters (without changing it ) Just get to a scene shift and start a new chapter From MY reading perspective most chapters are 35-45 pages long Most chapters from other books are 12-18 pages long This would increase chapter count as when most people look for stories They look for books with many chapters and not so much, few chapter, but chapters are long I would ask that you say in book title ( after adding image ) “hello i know the chapter count looks short but each chapter on the “medium reading size” setting gives about 40 pages per chapter” This book is absolutely fantastic and definitely one of my favourites so far, currently on chapter 2 but feels like i’m already at what would be chapter 10! 😁 🎩 😁 ☕️👌