Doctor Who The Mechanic

The author here I am surprised many people actually like this I had only intended to write the one chapter but many of you have asked me to write more of this, Doctor who is one of my favourite TV shows so i am happy to do so, although I may change a few things to make the story better and example would be I felt that the time lord are said to be the most intelligent race in the universe yet there only ability was regeneration and none had any unique to them as individuals. to accommodate this I will add something called the Mechanical Force used by those who worked as technicians and mechanics. for those wondering if the cannon will change the answer is most likely since a second time lord on board the TARDIS will cause changes, i also think a companion for nick will be important since Time lords tend to be arrogant from what's shown on the show. having someone that's not one will act as a way to give growth to nick.

This story as a great start and, while it only has 2 chapters at the time of writing this review, I can't stop myself from wishing there was more. Please author release more chapters, just don't over tax yourself. I hope to be reading your work for a long time.

I'll be honest I'm liking the story so far, to be fair I am hoping for some time skips not a lot but I do want him to interact with amy pond

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yes just yes there is nothing I could possibly say to try how good this is just yes all the way yes

It's really good, but grammer needs work and needs more chapters.

Haven't read any Doc Who fanfiction so I'm quite intrigued by this so I've given it a trial. Well...it's quite a read. Considering its a fanfiction I can't say much but the grammar is abysmal. The dao of mtl knows no end but this is still quite a hurdle to read and understand. The story flow is okay, but the wording and everything is a mess which takes u out of the story. No space between words sometimes, no proper flow between one scence to the next. Conversations are the most confusing to read. But the world of Doc Who is interesting so the world building drags the ratings up. Still if u like Doc Who, do give it read. Spitting blood and getting qi deviation from the scriptures are an essential path of the dao. Just don't go getting heart demons from this. Rest sometimes before your brain cells die. This a good trial for u and rewarding for those of you who are in the path of this dao.

Hola autor muchas gracias por seguir escribiendo la y subiendo la está historia espero que pueda ser subiendo más capítulos gracias 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

Good overall and I like the MC... only thing I don't like is the grammar in the recent chapters has been awful.

This is amazing and I'm truly enjoying it. Please keep up the updates. Looking forward to more

it is good, but it only has 1 chapter. Please add more so I can really enjoy it.