Tinkering With Life (GoT SI)

This is really great! I love the concept, as well as the laid back personality of the MC. There're some inconsistencies for those die-hard GoT fans out there, but for the casual reader it won't matter much.

How long will he go around working for other people? If the MC was going to be this lackluster and unambitious, why give him such an OP power? Its like superman, very op but has a mundane job and zero ambition. Personally i dont like OC love interests, and i dont if this guy will end up her (or get a harem idk), but it wouldnt have been annoying if not for the already bland story. No goals, no ambition, no conflict, no progress. Thats what it feels like, a story thats at a dead end.

Interesting concept unfortunately the MC is content being a good dog ................................................................................

His laid-back attitude is pleasant, the pacing of the story is acceptable, with an interesting and underused type of power, and while there are points in the writing to improve on in the story, it doesn't detract from the fact that it's a good experience to read.

I like how your pacing it so far and I love his laid back attitude the grammar is great and there really is no need for world building as we all already know it’s game of thrones hands down it’s a great story and a clam story to the nearly always fast past fighting game of thrones fan fica out there

Artificial, Poor Prose, Cliche ridden Canon-Compliant(ish), and just overall rough as a story.

There are some reviews saying that the MC has no ambition and they give a low score, this is false because the MC does have ambition, not in gold or land but in knowledge, he studies the limits of his ability that can make him immortal so that if worry about being a lord? this is the good thing, but in chapters 15 onwards the MC starts to turn psychopath which I don't like and will probably make me drop, but who likes that I recommend it

Главный персонаж то ли даун то ли блаженный. Имея такую способность максимум на что его хватило стать слугой у Старка. Идиот. Просто езжай в Эсос набери сирот улучши их и вот у тебя армия преданых солдат дальше а что хватит мозгов. Предложи Визерису армию и трахи дейнерис а потом стань королем вестероса.

I think my biggest problem with this story is that I can't sympathize with the MC. Well, he goes from one thing to another, does something and then something else... even so, after 60 chapters I can't imagine myself doing anything like him. His relationships seem fragile, his actions seem pointless or constantly causing unnecessary problems. He seems like a hyperactive child with nothing really to worry about until he does. The story seems to leave loose ends everywhere while the MC keeps jumping around... I think the biggest feeling this story gave me was frustration. It wasn't bad enough, so I kept reading, but I always ended up disappointed at key moments, so I got frustrated, anyway... I regret having read it.

Great novel. thank you! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💯💯👏👏👏👏💯👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💯💯👏👏👏👏💯👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

wonderful. make it longer or post more frequently. that's my only wish

very good story, absolutely great and not cringe MC. Great story progression, love the way the story was going. Unfortunately, the story appears to be dropped, as no updates have come for months.

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really good powers and story, please continue 🙏