Aden Strong: Avatar In DC

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The story is pretty basic and average there’s nothing special bout it it’s like most dc fanfic what makes it bad for me though is the mc theres nothing that makes me wanna read bout him

It's a very good fanfic, the beginning wasn't the best, but with each chapter i feel the novel evolving, the system is "smooth", it's not unpleasant at all like most systems novels on this site, the MC's personality is relatively original, i feel like most of the MCs on this site are relatively similar so it's refreshing (to me) to read about a different mc, i hope that just like the story he will also evolve as a person. His relationship with other characters hasn't been very developed yet, but it seems to be going down an interesting path, not too forced and not ignored, although there aren't many interactions yet i feel that everything is going in an ideal way, it's "smooth "... I hope the author doesn't add more powers to the MC, i see some people complaining that he is weak and having the avatar powers is no big deal, but i believe that he can do amazing things with this power, especially if the level of power of the elements is greater than in Avatar (the anime), i imagine him being able to cause devastating earthquakes, summoning giant meteors (like madara), shooting lightning so powerful that Thor would be jealous, creating tsunamis of hundreds of meters, hurricanes so powerful that they can destroy entire cities, or even creating a new ice age! Okay, i got a little excited here, but what I mean is that the possibilities are endless, his power is fantastic and it will be amazing to read about his development. I love the DC universe, unfortunately there aren't so many fanfics about it and this is one that I'm most excited about it's future, i really hope that the author doesn't drop this novel, i'll be rooting for it. PS: MCxSupergirl (make it happen!)

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It's pretty average and generic Fanfic like others, MC got transported to DC universe and now he wants to greatest hero (anti hero more likely) he has the powers of Avatar but he still takes serum and comes across a power hungry individual (at least to me). There's nothing new or interesting in fanfic except the fact that he wants to form his team of "hero's" as he didn't like to work in Young justice. Character interaction is pretty good but interaction between him and Artemis is pretty forced and cliche. That's it, that's is all there in this Fanfic for now.

Amazing. Even though I hate some decisions he made it was logical descissions. Make more plz…-.-.-.-./.-.-.-./.2,:-,…./…’xcvx,’clelvldmddndm

if people can give 5 star without any reason why i can simple give 1 for not reason too. it's not like anyone who care about my review, so why not

It is really confusing to tell who is talking during character interaction. Making it hard to get into the story having multiple characters talking at once with indicating who is talking takes away from the story.

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The MC is way to inconsistent to be a good story. The author seems to sacrifice a lot if it leads him to be able to write a action scene and it leads to a bad story with questionable decisions all over the place

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The fact that the justice league knows that he was reincarnated and even that he remembers their universe as a cartoon is cringe af. honestly just the fact that he is in the young justice group is kinda lame.. the mc acts worse than they do. in case ppl dont know, they act like entitled 12 year olds. cuz they kinda are. robin is 13 and acts like it. Mc makes the same mistake every mission and recognises that, but just 'smiles at the others' and does it anyway like a retard.

well for starters the protagonist is named strong he is a guy with less gut and a the start of the story is a bit weak WQ 2stars SD 2stars CD 5 stars US 3stars WB 1stars