In fast with wishes
First of all english is my second language, so maybe it will be hard for you to understand the point that I'm trying to view in the story.
NOTE, that I don't own any of the characters in this story except for the MC and other new characters that I will put in to make the story interesting for my part.
You can give me Idea's on the comments on how to improve my writing, as well as suggestions to make the story more interesting.
Synopsis:
Our MC was an ordinary guy, who like anybody else may consider normal with otaku tendencies. On the day that he was about to graduate from his hell of a college life there "truck-kun" came and show his formidable ability. When our MC woke up he was in a beach house where there he met the great ROB, who then gave him the chance to reincarnate and enjoy his life for a second time.
P.S.
this is my first try on the story and the upload maybe inconsistent due to various reasons that may arise.
Should have just stood to fast and furious made it all about hacking and cars and heists stuff like that shouldn’t have put magic and shit in f&f
Ai and very plain if U actually wrote this I'm sorry it's like watching paint dry the mc doesn't think ahead lets great sage do everything and is not acting like a human
This is the first time I've seen an author destroy his novel from the first chapter. demon lord in the Fast and Furious universe. 0.5/5
hey bro can you keep writing please don't make this book where you just drop it in five chapters it's not no good fast and the furious fanficion on this app
just read the first chapter and see its a bad wish fulfillment with an mc without there own will. if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would
Magic? Fast and furious? Gross [img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
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too much chaos.... Will he get involved with John Wick??? need to know more....please update more chapters....