In fast with wishes
First of all english is my second language, so maybe it will be hard for you to understand the point that I'm trying to view in the story.
NOTE, that I don't own any of the characters in this story except for the MC and other new characters that I will put in to make the story interesting for my part.
You can give me Idea's on the comments on how to improve my writing, as well as suggestions to make the story more interesting.
Synopsis:
Our MC was an ordinary guy, who like anybody else may consider normal with otaku tendencies. On the day that he was about to graduate from his hell of a college life there "truck-kun" came and show his formidable ability. When our MC woke up he was in a beach house where there he met the great ROB, who then gave him the chance to reincarnate and enjoy his life for a second time.
P.S.
this is my first try on the story and the upload maybe inconsistent due to various reasons that may arise.
Should have just stood to fast and furious made it all about hacking and cars and heists stuff like that shouldn’t have put magic and shit in f&f
Ai and very plain if U actually wrote this I'm sorry it's like watching paint dry the mc doesn't think ahead lets great sage do everything and is not acting like a human
This is the first time I've seen an author destroy his novel from the first chapter. demon lord in the Fast and Furious universe. 0.5/5
just read the first chapter and see its a bad wish fulfillment with an mc without there own will. if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would if I could rate it lower I would
This is genuinely one of the worst fanfics I've ever read on webnovel and that is saying something because I have read some messed up shit on here [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
Magic? Fast and furious? Gross [img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
Tenía esperanzas de que seria bueno pero terminé decepcionado principalmente por los poderes que le dio( Si queria un personaje Op Podria darle el suero super soldado o todo los conocimientos y abilidades de takmaster,Batman o {Cobra de J.I Joe creo que asi se llama la película } O ingluso Greenu Arrow ) le doy ☆/☆☆☆☆☆
Don’t waste your time reading this.🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡on it and now I have read it before I read it and read it there and read it and read the book and read it there and read it and
hey bro can you keep writing please don't make this book where you just drop it in five chapters it's not no good fast and the furious fanficion on this app
You shouldn't have broke the rule of reincarnators dude. This fanfictions shouldn't be about a world with mysteries it should be about a world we know and change you made a lot of blunders and there are a lot of plotholes as well.
This wasn’t what I was expecting lol 😂 but I’ll give the remake a chance if it’s not named fast and furious because this shit is to absurd for a normal world like fast and furious. mc feels like a level 1000 character in a level 5 world 😑
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The world Background has great potential, but this fanfiction is riddled with AI use and has many plot holes because of AI. Anyway keep up the good work.
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