Trying my luck in Game of Thrones
A GOT x ASOIAF mix, I didn't read the books so I will be heavily using the show, but things like old Valyria, the Mountain that rides and other things will use book elements to "correct them"
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After a somewhat fulfilling life and meeting a tragic end, meet Edric, a man reincarnated by god into what he percieves as an unknown medieval fantasy world. Through sheer opportunism, cunning, his own growing ambition and a clever use of the kind gifts imposed on him, he will strive to navigate and power through the hardships the world and its inhabitants will impose on him, starting of course, at the bottom of the social ladder in an attemp to reach for the tallest mountains of power.
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I use a little AI, The GOT show, the book and show wikis along with YouTube videos to help me write but if you find any mistakes don't hesitate to point them out.
A synopsis that tells us absolutely nothing about the story and no tags... off to a great start
Unique, different and entertaining. Has high potential.
So far there's 11 chapters, all of which are well written and easy to follow, the flow of the story is very good. Edric the MC, is written well so far and is consistent in his actions. All the other characters are done properly and the conversations make sense. Looking forward to reading more. But Author I would recommend a better Cover picture, one that's clearer and potentially shows a blacksmith.
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so far this is definitely one of the good works in the world of George Martin, I like that our main character is not a Targaryen harem keeper, but a simple guy with a few cheats who wisely uses the opportunities that come his way, I give it 5*, the story has great potential and I look forward to the continuation and the influence of our hero on the history of the world
It's a fantastic concept. Many stories overly emphasize combat at the expense of their plots, and when they focus on combat, they often portray characters as too powerful, which can be unrealistic. I appreciate that this narrative is more grounded. I love the blacksmith theme; it seems to have more potential than a typical tale about a hedge knight or a noble-born warrior. cant wait for more man
One of most well written and especially well thought of got FF. They don't force upon u to accept that the mc is a born god..the mc starts humbly and reasonable explanation for everything.
Unique? sure! But who wants to waste time reading blacksmith in HOG|GOT 😫. Kingdom building is the tag man GDJBVT5RKDKV5HJFTB66UFQJFNUO3HG46BAMYEYDENJSS3UM3ALYEZ4M
This is pretty good, we don't have a murder hobo for an MC and zero expositions on GOT or ASOIAF.
My only complaint is that the protagonist feels too empty and/or flat. Aside from that, the story is brilliant.