Winter's Phalanx

It would be decent if the ai the author is using didn't have to make the simplest of sentences so mysterious or powerful, like Jesus, have them talk normally, not whatever tf this is. Just more ai trash in this cesspit.

This story will be very slow paced, detail oriented and attempting to add in historical accuracy. Please let me know when you figure out who's he's been reincarnated as!

like the premise was good enough, and the writing is above average... the ai sometimes make even the simplest of sentences into exaggerations, but its digestible... overall a 7.5 out of 10

Good story with a little explored concept. If your execution remains true to itself and consistent, you got yourself a list topper story and a very loyal reader. So far so good👍

very well written story . leonidas as ned stark will make for wonderful reading

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Truly top tier. GOATED. Very good read. 👌👏❤️🖋 Writing Quality Stability of Updates Story Development Character Design World Background

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Great start. Although the fic is too early for me to give a proper in depth review I would say it is looking well researched. Couple of concerns with the realistic rise of a kingdom. Most fics at this stage use 'trade' or 'inventions' to somehow explain the complete overhaul of the North within ten chapters. So I hope we get a gradual rise rather than a sprint to immediate utopia. Other than that. Really good fic.

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