Game of Thrones: The Impaler.

Game of Thrones: The Impaler.

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Author: The_Jagger_
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"Oops, You Died—Now You’re a Vampire Lord in Westeros!"



Unfortunately, your life has come to an untimely end—and to make things worse, you can’t remember anything. But death isn’t the end for you. Instead, you’re given a second chance: rebirth in the brutal world of Westeros… as a Progenitor Vampire, one of the most powerful of your kind.



As a welcome gift, you’re granted a few special items to help you survive. But there’s a catch—you must complete dangerous missions in this unforgiving land. From navigating the Game of Thrones to facing the horrors beyond the Wall, your new existence won’t be easy.



—good luck, you’ll need it!





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The_Jagger_
The_Jagger_

This whole story started with a CYOA my girlfriend found—a Game of Thrones-themed one. It was fun, so I borrowed some elements like the missions, the starting items, and the drawbacks. That's all I took from it. As for the plot, I'd call it "original"... but it's still fanfiction. I've read tons of fics and I'm sure I've accidentally borrowed more than a few tropes from them. Now, about the writing—I have no idea what I'm doing. The ideas are in my head, but putting them into words isn't easy. I use AI to help edit, but I try my best to remove that robotic feel and keep my own voice in the text. Hopefully, it doesn't read like a machine wrote it. Thanks for reading!

24 days ago
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King_of_Daoist
King_of_Daoist

This has great potential to be a great GOT fanfic. Plz keep up the good work

23 days ago
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AMON
AMON

I spent a long time looking for a story like this, what would happen if a vampire from Castlevania was in Game of Thrones, so far I haven't seen anything that makes me see the story as bad, that's why You deserve five stars, I hope you keep making it and don't abandon it, it would be sad the way this story goes, it's going to be pure cinema🧐🍷🚬

22 days ago
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Amatai_Okami
Amatai_Okami

Great potential! [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]=Loving it]

24 days ago
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ZHODIAXK
ZHODIAXK

pretty good, but in my oppinion the story it's just little to fast

21 days ago
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CRUZEN
CRUZEN

Reveal Spoiler

16 days ago
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KaxaTana
KaxaTana

A huge thank you for this amazing fanfiction! Each chapter is truly a pleasure to read. I can't wait to read the next part!

22 days ago
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Yesnth
Yesnth

Writing Quality is phenomenal; 5/5. Although there's a notable dip in the quality somewhere along the middle, it picks back up. I would dare say that the story captures the feel of the original books in some sense. a minimalistic fashion of writing that captures everything and so much more. Also, author, I would like to give some advice. sometimes, what the story needs in not explanation, but vagueness. Try not to spell everything out. GOT is a story which makes people think. Keep us guessing, but not to the point it insults the intelligence of the reader. I'm not sure if AI editing is used, but honestly, I wouldn't even care for it. Story Development; 5/5. It is simply... perfect. Although it can feel a bit fast in the starting chapters, it levels out after about 10 chapters. It's a great piece of work with logical developments. Well, I say logical, but a lot of things that will spiral out of control and give rise to new and interesting situations haven't been explored yet. Regardless, I hold hope. Character Design; 4/5. There's nothing much to say about characters, except that they're like their book counterparts. The main point of a fanfic is undoubtedly the Mc and with no new characters introduced, the Mc needs to carry the narrative by himself. Vlad, looking at him from a high standpoint, is not that interesting of a character and there's not much we know about him. He's from earth, knows the story and apparently filled out a cyoa that made him become a vampire. His motivations are to complete the missions and live a long life. Also, defeating the night king since... he lives in the world. Duh. They're relatable goals, but there's no substance behind them. I mean, I understand how even making a good Mc can be challenging for a fanfic author, especially a newly starting one. Even I have trouble making good characters and I'll be sure to have a lot more in the future. Although it is completely fine to leave the story as is(its enteretaining nonetheless), I suggest throwing in bits and pieces of lore here and there about the Mc and have him think over his past life here and there. It might help, if might not. it's a gamble really. Update Stability; 5/5. Excellente World Background; 5/5. It's Asoiaf. What do you expect. Tl,dr; A very very entertaining fanfic. Give it a try, you won't regret it.

17 hours ago
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Anide_Oficial
Anide_Oficial

De los mejores Fanfictions de Juego de Tronos que he leído. Espero el autor tenga la estabilidad, inspiración y salud para seguir escribiendo más de esto... ¡Muchas gracias!

5 days ago
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LightCloud9
LightCloud9

Reveal Spoiler

19 days ago
2
AZRIEL_MORNINGSTAR
AZRIEL_MORNINGSTAR

it starts off pretty rushed but this fan fic is absolutely amazing ! please don't drop !!!

3 days ago
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ColeAsura
ColeAsura

I’ve only read five chapters but it’s very good and does Vlad ever impel someone like Vlad Dracula?

6 days ago
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Grim_Reaper17
Grim_Reaper17

Beautiful...

8 days ago
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Bter
Bter

banger so far. Mc is badass and his relationship with denearys is wholesome and loving. The writing is also good and flows nicely. all in all a very entertaining read.

10 days ago
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BEAST_OP
BEAST_OP

Good story thank for this ✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯

11 days ago
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