In Multiverse with Ultimate Gacha
Waking up in nothing but a cage would make anyone wonder: What the hell is going on?
But fortunately, you’ve been reincarnated with a cheat—a system designed to help you escape this dire situation.
Now, with the gacha system to guide you, navigating this dangerous world of Marvel becomes a little more manageable. After all, you never know when a certain guy might kick off a population control program, another might decide to play humanoid chess, or yet another starts scheming to rule over everyone.
Wait… wasn't that last one kind of the same? Anyway, it's a perilous world, and you were thrown into it without even being asked.
So, good luck to me!
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A fanfiction set in the Marvel Universe with gacha elements.
It's slow life at first and then it paces.
Reveal Spoiler
was okay until the battle of new york he all the sudden became emo edge lord started blaming the avengers for stuff that they couldn't control really just a toddler temper tantrum i gave this a good shot but im smelling chinese mc that kill all people that annoy him cause he can.
The story started great, was going good until the Battle of New York, I've started to hate these kinds of novels where they act like spoiled brat with power and humiliate Avangers, which I've mostly just read in Chinese novels. I still kept reading and then he just changed the world and went to another world all together.
i like the novel but you shouldn't add smut scenes this early on (especially not some random woman) even dual cultivation didn't have smut scenes this early on and it is a smut novel and i doubt you wanna make this a proper smut novel rather than a normal novel so i hope you do well
An overdose of cringe like it was directly injected into your veins. You might like it if you are into Chinese face slapping. Protagonist gets one of the most cringe classes at the start, is constantly "smirking" talks like an immature child during the fight like, "you really shouldn't have done that" or "my turn now!" And doesn't kill the female villain and recruits her instead... From what others have said on here he goes on to face slapping the Avengers. I don't know if that is true because I just couldn't stand the cringe anymore. Could be others cup of tea, but it isn't mine.
killed it by nerfing Mc and making him a batch no one likes you nervous for no reason he doesn't keep his body like a traveler you just make him a fuckin baby killed your book fast
Personally, this fic was going great for me until the world hopping. I don't actually mind the multiverse hopping, it was the method of his travel that killed this story for me. He REINCARNATED into a new world, that meant that he has multiple bodies now and that's a very big no for me. I despise multiple/clone bodies with a passion. The only one I'll ever accept was shadow clones because they were temporary, not permanent.
please the MARVEL title to MULTIVERSE or something because I read this not expecting to have world hopping thing what a letdown also when will he gonna get back to marvel world
I would say the world hopping took the most fun out of the story. The character of the MC is also a bit weird but tolerable. The powers he gained were fun at first I would say. But the transmigration and reincarnation like that is just a bit over the top and not my cup of tea. The writing quality is great. So despite everything I would suggest reading this story. TY author
story is inconsitent be it the leveling system or the mc character. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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4 stars writing quality 1 star story development - MC admitted to his mother that he's not the original character wth? that ruined everything! so? I stopped and dropped this at that moment 3 stars character design - OP but its ok
I will say i don't like they way he interacted with the avengers or his original world. But when you introduce Supreme Magnus, i think this can be salvaged. So my suggestion is that instead of typical multiversal world that are generally used in fanfiction you should go for more of the old or not so common world. Also make him less arrogant, also decrease his interaction with his system. Overall this is okay MCU story but can be made good with multiversal concept.
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It’s alright… by that I mean the concept is alright. The story not so much, there’s promise don’t get me wrong. It’s biggest problem the way that it was written. Not even my most shitty story is as big of a mess as this. It hops back and forth between angsty teenage writing and stylised AI generated phrases. He goes from conniving antagonistic character in one moment to edgelord McGoober in the next. Not a terrible read but don’t expect a thought provoking story.