Naruto : The ultimate Troublemaker
My original book will be out in January.
[Rise Beyond Celestial]
An eastern fantasy with gore, cultivation, a cruel and manipulative protagonist, and no system.
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An otaku completely obsessed with the series Naruto finds himself thrust into an adventure he never could have imagined. After a tragic accident worthy of a filler episode, he reincarnates in the body of Shikai Nara, an average guy in the story, born five years before the Kyubi attack. But that’s not all: he has received a mission from the god Otsutsuki.
Reflecting on what he should do, Shikai encounters Kakashi, who is trying to appear mysterious by adjusting his mask.
" So you are the successor of Yondaime," Kakashi asks.
'Isn’t that the guy who bowed three times to Itachi to beg for mercy? One of the most powerful in the world? This world is doomed!' "You really are an inspiration for the new generation, Kakashi-senpai."
He then decides to found Kurayami, an organization ready to get their hands dirty to prevent everyone from ending up like Kakashi: a shit lacking Chakra.
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This is an original book not a translation of Chinese book. No plagiarism. I hope you enjoy the book.
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This is a generic Naruto isekai fanfic: - The MC has some background before reincarnation, that's cool. - The MC is OP in the sense of learning (as per background) but lacks experience, so he does not always win. - Interactions with other characters are shallow. Minato, Kushina and Tsunade have some plot but everything else is like a checklist of, meet-and-learn secret techniques. - The famous 5-year-old with a shredded body acting like a man. - MC is a powerhouse in the making but doesn't want to change the plot. He has "a plan"; that's why I said it's a generic fanfic, he wants to be a key character as if that wouldn't change everything.... In the end, for me, this is a cherry-picking of things the author wants without changing too much of the original plot.
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Hi guys, this is LuxCrusis. I made this Fan fiction because I like the work and writing it is partly a way to let off steam and relax. That's why I have no intention of sending you to patreon, to pay for a fan-fiction. Apart from the Mc and other characters (No spoiler) Basically the characters I did not create them😅. In short, the Mc is someone who seeks revenge by all means, who manipulates, kills ... While having fun along the way with Kunoichis😈. I hope you like the book, do not hesitate to ask me questions and give me strength to continue. *** LuxCrusis
nice work done. keep on the good work 😉 ✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️
Is it just me or this fic just post random chapters from the full one which makes the story so confusing as it doesn't have a linear timeline
This fanfiction is captivating and beautifully crafted. The story is full of surprises that keep the suspense alive and hold the reader's attention. I particularly enjoyed the manipulative side of the main character, which adds depth and strategy to the narrative. I have about thirty chapters left to read, and I can’t wait to see what happens next!👌🏾✨ I hope the author will make sure to give us all 1000 chapters 🔥
Sinceramente la historia me parece buena, el MC me parece basura cuando reencarno y no le habían dado el conocimiento supuestamente divino el MC tenía potencial después de eso......... Se volvió completamente diferente y medio raro... Y en cada capítulo desde ahí fue empeorando a pesar de decir que el MC es inteligente todas sus acciones demuestra lo contrario
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I like the MC, he's so overpowered. The story is captivating, and the fact that there are so many plot twists is what makes your fanfic interesting. But tell me, how many will the harem be composed of?
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I like the story even though the MC's actions are sometimes ambiguous. Did you always intend to write the original book this January?