The Original Realm

The Original Realm

Fantasy61 Chapters16.7K Views
Author: Bob_Rossette
(not enough ratings)
Overview
Table of Contents
Synopsis

Official Art for the Novel at @the_original_realm

(I am not sure if this is allowed, if its not please inform me and I will remove the link)



Ten years ago, six-year-old Luke Mace witnessed the impossible. On a snowy mountain, during what was supposed to be an ordinary family hike, a monstrous creature emerged from a glowing portal and tore his life apart, killing his parents before vanishing into thin air. No one believed his story. The official explanation was an avalanche, but Luke has never forgotten the truth: the creature, and the strange portal, were real.



Now sixteen, Luke joins a school field trip to the same mountain, only to find himself drawn back to the site of his deepest pain. As the snow falls and strange forces awaken, the portal reactivates, pulling Luke into Aethereon, a realm of ancient power and shifting landscapes, brimming with the mysterious energy known as Advent.



In this otherworldly dimension, Luke discovers that the creature responsible for his parents' deaths, known only as The Anomaly, roams freely, a force of chaos that answers to no one. Determined to confront it and make it pay for what it took from him, Luke begins his journey, joined by a group of unlikely companions he meets along the way. Together, they navigate the perils of Aethereon, from its labyrinthine forests to its towering, crystalline peaks, facing foes born of Advent's raw power.



As Luke learns to wield Advent himself, he realizes that his quest for revenge is far more complicated than he imagined. The Anomaly is more than just a killer-it is a being tied to the fabric of both Aethereon and Earth, and its existence threatens to unravel the balance between worlds. To survive and protect everything he loves, Luke must face not only the monster but the truths buried deep within himself.



The Original Realm is a gripping story of loss, vengeance, and self-discovery, as Luke Mace ventures into the unknown to confront the past and forge his own path forward.

2 Reviews
(not enough ratings)
Translation Quality
Stability of Updates
Story Development
Character Design
World Background
Share your thoughts with others
Liked
newest
Bob_Rossette
Bob_Rossette

Alright I know I'm the author, but I'm going to try my best to do an honest review of my story currently. (Chapter 44 as of writing this) I'll be honest the introduction of my story is not that good, while I'm happy with the prologue and the first arc. I'm not satisfied with how I wrote the first chapter as well as how situations were written, making the MC not the absolute focus point. In the second arc, I'm way more satisfied, the story is progressing way more with actual worldbuilding, not to mention that I'm way more satisfied with the main cast and how the MC is being written. Now, I know 4 stars is a high rating, but I'm doing this because I know that each chapter is going to be better and each arc is going to be exponentially greater in quality and enjoyment. I'll also answer to any questions in the replies in necessary.

21 days ago
3
Ate_D_Food
Ate_D_Food

This is my first time using webnovel, and I’m not sure how I found this novel with such a small scale author, but I was captivated by it almost immediately. I was never really fond of the fantasy genre but this novel really changed my perspective. In my opinion, the world building is kind of lacking compared to other novels I’ve read but all other aspects make up for it. Overall it’s a beautiful piece of literature that caters well to not only fantasy enjoyers, but readers who prefer other genres aswell. I believe wholeheartedly that this novel is one of the most enjoyable ones I’ve read in quite some time and I think a lot of people can agree with me once they’ve given it a chance. Definitely a good read, and I can’t wait to see more updates!

21 days ago
3