Talent System In The Naruto Universe

exceptional story, easily one of the better fanfics here, but there is one major problem in my opinion. The needlessly common and detailed descriptions of feet. it seems like every other paragraph mentions how this girl is barefoot, or how the Mc is offering to take the shoes off of tsunade for her "pale, slender feet and delicate soles" or whatever. it's a blatant fetish in a story that isn't written as smut, and it has zero impact on the story other than making reading it more awkward for people who aren't turned on by feet.

Peak novel. Even at 190 chapters in patreon, I'm still intrigued and entertained. Keep up with the good work 🥰

i don't know why this wonderful novel doesn't have more readers and reviews its's a great novel

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Cerita yang hebat, kamu telah menemukan Hidden Gem Penerjemah. Terimakasih atas karyanya. Aku jamin ceritanya tidak membosankan. Ngomong-ngomong romance lumayan dan tidak terburu-buru.

Very refreshing to read, focuses more on relationship and training. Madara, Hiruzen and Danzo's intervention are not too much which is a good point for me reading it, but it's not yet explained why this is, specially with madara, there might be a reason like in Roran. Though sometimes the interaction between the mc and tsunade feels like a chore to read, I understand the gradual development of feelings but I'd prefer they stay in a student-teacher relationship. It's becoming more of a harem with light interactions to multiple konoichi.

bad translation, inconsistencies, too much water 2.5/5

Really grwat work! After reading 124 chapters - i loved the chemistry between characters ! 10 out of 10!

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j adore l histoire mais je suppose que cela est une traduction si oui j aimerais beaucoup voir l original pour comparé . serais t il possible d avoir le nom d origine ? merci ( french )

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Great Keep it up ...........................